Reviews for Brood's War
Paulthored chapter 3 . 5/20/2013
"... are forced *west* towards the mountainous *eastern* parts of the continent,..." (Insert Raised Eyebrow Here)

Otherwise, Good work.
Might I suggest ' The Zerg Swarm' by, u/2889432/East-Bridge
OSR fanatic chapter 4 . 12/22/2012
Great Story! :) Update Soon! :)
Lieutenant Paladine chapter 4 . 9/24/2012
You are most welcome. This story could use a bit of work, but shows lots of promise. Please keep it alive.
Kolarthecool chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
You need to get a beta, this story I really hard to read due to the spelling and grammatical errors. I would suggest rewriting it or getting a beta
Phalanx213 chapter 3 . 6/23/2012
how long will it be on hold?
nopparitari chapter 4 . 5/29/2012
the story is proggressing way faster than the original (in terms of chapters), which i dont mind at all :)

id like you to continue the story, looks great so far.
Invader Viceroy chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
make more
Invader Viceroy chapter 2 . 12/16/2011
gjco chapter 3 . 12/4/2011
maddnessisgood chapter 3 . 11/9/2011
more now more
chaoscrafter008 chapter 3 . 11/7/2011
well done sorry i didnt review eearlier was kind of busy with life and work. loving what you have done with your brood and ts good to see that although you are usung vexmasters idea for your story you are still keeping it original. your idea of unstable genetics for zerg is also a brilliant idea. making it so older generations of zerg arent obsolete instead evolving with the brood. was going to suggest usung the nydus worms for mineral extraction as they could tunnel underground find mineral deposits and regurgetate it at the hive cluster.

any way great chapter, well done and hope to ear from you soon.

Invader Viceroy chapter 3 . 11/6/2011
Sterata chapter 3 . 11/4/2011
thanks for the update, though this is alot like the original, so somthing new plot wise I think woud be better because the situation is not the same
karthik9 chapter 3 . 11/4/2011
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
Sterata chapter 2 . 10/27/2011
god so far i like your twist on this and have to ask ... why the cliffy and two month gap?
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