|Reviews for Reunited|
| Comrade Athelwine chapter 3 . 2/13/2012
And we are back at another Chapter. Back to Reviewing.
*Takes on his Reviewer hat*
Now, Once again, I was quite disappointed how short the chapter is, Im sorry, but It was really short. I could barely begin, before The chapter ended.
Secondly, sometimes the Actions does not seem to have that much impact, nor Does the environments get that well described...
*throws off his reviewer hat*
Do Not Fret! Cause those mistakes are honest :) And i do them a million times XD Its just easier pointing them out, standing on the outside.
I still love the story :) I enjoy the Irony of how the dude who actually has a "Goverment" has to ask of help from the Anarchs XD
I will be looking forwards to the next chapter :)
| LadyMacbeth'sHomegirl chapter 2 . 1/21/2012
I really liked to hear more
| Comrade Athelwine chapter 2 . 12/20/2011
Oh Lovely :) I am so Glad you decided to continue...
Now on with my Critique hat... *Clears throat*
I am saddened to see how short the chapter is, and the fact that we have some, sometimes, feeling a bit rushed of description...
Also I sometimes felt like the action just drifted by without the real and heavy depth of their consequences.
And now we throw off the hat, and go back to my normal self :)
I REALLY like the relationship between Uther and Heather, their partnership of a mixture of Equal, but still servitude...
Throwing Iris into the play really creates some drama, and i am looking forward to seeing if things end in bloodshed, or a breaking of the Masquerade.
I will be sitting on pins and needles for the next chapter :)
8/10 for this chapter :)
| Splout chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
Good chap please update!
| Comrade Athelwine chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Ok this was good enough to make me yell at my screen and ask why there were no more chapters... So I do think you should continue :)
Also I am quite happy "Uther" is with Nines :)
| Sebastian chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
Why aren't you writing more?
| reality deviant chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
now what? it starts to be interesting.
| memmek10k chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
pretty good start I hope you finish the story