Reviews for So Obvious
simply anonymous chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Oh poor, poor Soren. Will Ike ever get a clue? D
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
I can definitely imagine something like this happening at some point. Soren's reaction to what Ike said made me laugh a bit.

However, I did noticce one thing that was kinda off...

"Who?" Soren asked absently. He had his blue coffee cup to his lips, which currently held ICED TEA because it was too damned hot for anything else.

"Kieran and Oscar. It's pretty obvious," Ike said.

There was a crash as the coffee cup hit the floor and Soren stared at Ike, wide-eyed. He stood in a pool of COFFEE and colored glass.
Thumana chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Poor Soren. I especially liked Kieran seeing Ike and Soren as "obvious rivals". Perhaps Kieran is not as oblivious as he seems...