|Reviews for Public Enemies|
| kmfroggi chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
absolutely loved this! edward, guns and a little speak easy! too good to be true!
| Suicide Emo chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
God I love this story
| Kapriiwhoosh chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Gah! I just fell in love with this one.
| tahlullahbelle chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
so i read this story i don't even know how long ago and i never bookmarked it or anything, which was stupid on my part becasue this is an awesome story, and so the other day i saw that johnny depp movie public enemies and i thought of this story but i couldn't remeber the name and i found it on accident and i'm pretty sure i scared my best friend when i got really excited about finding it again. so the moral of this story is that i'm a rambler and this story just made my day.
| bzwifenmom24-7 chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
I it. Gangster family story.
| LOLO 5-0 chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Too Cool I always love Edward with a gun !
| The Girl With The Umbrella chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
I really liked it! I love EPOVs and this one was amazing.
| Jlyons0424 chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
Love it. Very addicting story. I would love to see it extended.
| strangevisions chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
| cullen sandra chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
hmm thinking did edward kill jacob? he was still alive when the police got there. would be good to see him come back so edward can shoot him all over again.
i loved that edward didnt go with jessica or any other woman after he meet bella.
when edward told bella about that job at esmes clup, i thought he wanted her to become a payed girl, i was a bit angry with him. lucky for him it was just a waitress job. are you going to continue this story? would love to see them all on the run and get back at the volturi.
| lettywilson chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
I just finally read this, see extending this and see how things work on the run. I liked the old time theme!
| Mr. Shy Rockstar chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
I really really really really really really like this (: It was epic. I enjoyed it very much :D haha Police back then were so much easier to get past than they are now LOL
Awesome story, :D
| FFpassion chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Excellent story, I really enjoyed it.
Great way to spend my Saturday afternoon, thank you.
| Daybreak96 chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Great story absolutely love it
| Christina Fey chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Kinda cute in it's own way. The whole things about church and yadda yadda screamed straight out of There Will Be Blood, but it was sort of necessary for location purposes so you did make it your own. Fantastic job. I think you could have added a little during the period of time Bella was working and skirting around Edward. Perhaps even just a line about how they both had 'feelings' or something. But it was still an amazing little one shot. Loved it. Thanks for writing!