Reviews for Public Enemies
Daybreak96 chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Great story absolutely love it
Christina Fey chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Kinda cute in it's own way. The whole things about church and yadda yadda screamed straight out of There Will Be Blood, but it was sort of necessary for location purposes so you did make it your own. Fantastic job. I think you could have added a little during the period of time Bella was working and skirting around Edward. Perhaps even just a line about how they both had 'feelings' or something. But it was still an amazing little one shot. Loved it. Thanks for writing!

stacieard chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
i so loved this one shot. great writing! :)
Jaws28 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
awesome story! loved it!
Tennischica2012 chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Amazing! It would be so cool if it were continued!
Annie Lantus chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Amazing oneshot! :D
Somebody's Bella chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Loved it! I liked this gangster-type Edward. Great story.
heygirl18 chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Loved the OS - congrats on the placing and thanks for sharing xx
NeeNee246 chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
I love this! It is fantastic! :)
hardygirl87 chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Can't wait for more i love it.
jjjjanna chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Grreaaatt story :)
Lurecyka chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Wow...if you decide to keep on with this story, you will make me sooo happy. I really love this o/s and think that there could be so more to it !
Angeldolphin01 chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
I really love it.
Erikajo chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Cool story! :)
Pianogirl05 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Fantastic story! Is there any possibility you will continue this? I would love to read about them out on their adventures now that they are all on the run. Lived the girls coming to their rescue at the end.
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