|Reviews for The Soul Search|
| Drassil chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Thank you for this. I thought it was fun, but more importantly I hope you enjoyed writing it. Putting yourself in the story surely meant that you did. :)
I liked your portrayal of Lord Fear, and distinctive ideas such as the advisors entering the Dungeon and the overstocked clue table! There are impressive moments of suspense too. I hope you won't mind if I point out a few spelling mistakes: 'chow' should be 'ciao' (it's an Italian word), 'un-phased' should be 'unfazed' and 'Majita' has a d rather than a t.
I look forward to finding out more about Crystal in your next story. I hope there won't be too many other characters stealing the limelight!