|Reviews for Tied for Last Original Ending|
| oslca35 chapter 1 . 5/9
Even if this is an older story, this ending makes more sense. .. the words he used should've made a horcurx...so this ending is the best for this story. ..this story has me in tears several times...thank you and I can't wait to read more...
| Lena Lennox chapter 1 . 1/31
This ending is better. Why did you decide to change it?
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4
so i just finished tied for last, was obviously seriously conflicted over the ending (it was so horrible and painful and i had literal tears leaking out of my eyes, but also it was so perfect and beautiful and pERFECT PERFECT PERFECT YOURE AMAZING ILY) but then i saw that you had an alternate ending posted, which i assumed was the more happily ever after one. and i wasn't disappointed! i loved both endings-although admittedly this one is a bit too happy to be a proper ending. still, i loved it. I think this is a fic im definitely going to reread once or twice (or thrice, or more) because it was nust so flawless. i love your writing, i love your style, and now im going to frantically read every other fic youve written and hyperventilate alone in my room.
| easilyaddictedgirl chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
...and would continue to stay that way forevermore.
| Laburnum.V chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
Yep, defiantly liked this ending better or not...
Well at least it didn't make me bawl my eyes out while reading this.
| Penny0626 chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
This ending is so awesome!Really! That one makes me nearly cry my heart out. But I think can the reason of Tom didn't die just be love? Just like how Lily protect Harry for he had already decide to sacrifice his life for something more important, something more than himself?
Anyway, love conquers all!
And, I like the Tom you created very much! Kiss you bothXDDDD
| Lynda Loyde chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
Let's pretend that this really is the real ending... But lets face it, the other ending made more sense. I guess the reality always hurts, eh?
I couldn't thank you enough for writing this story. Honestly, I've never read a better Harry Potter fanfic. The closest story which could get to this level of perfection was a four founder story, "A Tale of a Time Long Gone".
...Do you know how disappointing it is when you realise that you've stayed up all night, with literally no sleep at all, only to end up with a broken heart?
| ANA5800 chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
I love this
| amr56 chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
This ending is nice, but I think I like the other better. I don't understand why Tom would have created an accidental horcrux just because he killed someone. If that happened, why wouldn't Voldemort have created another one when e killed Harry? Or anyone else? But this was well-written and mostly lighthearted, and I enjoyed reading it a lot. Thanks for sharing!
| Lorna Potter chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
I like this ending a lot beer hahaha haha ha...ha. I bawled reading the other ending but I cried even harder reading this one. Definitely one of my all time favourite fanfictions. Well done.
| FlyingSilverDreams chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
I am writing this review to emphasize that the "Note of Weight" placed at the very top of Chapter One had been slightly exaggerated, if not completely out of place for this fanfic.
Truthfully, reading TfL has been an adventure in itself. The way you wrote about the characters were, for a lack of a better word, understandable. I was almost appalled when I reflected upon your words: TfL "not only portrays an abusive relationship; it glorifies it." For me, and very likely, MOST of your readers, that had not been the case.
The way you portrayed Tom Marvolo Riddle and Hermione Jean Granger's relationship was exhilarating and seemed every-bit-of-realistic within the boundaries of J.K. Rowling's imagination. Pertaining to the events of Tom betraying Hermione to view the contents of her death was cruel, yes, but to the character, Tom Riddle, it was justifiable simply because he is TOM RIDDLE. In fact, if you had not "arranged" Tom's memories to be shown to Hermione (which FURTHER justified the "cruelty"), his actions would still, in essence, be reasonable. Of course, psychological abuse still IS abuse, but in this particular fanfic, your choice of words were more than enough to sympathize on what he did.
The reason why I had carelessly threw around the word, "exaggeration," was because the "Note of Weight" in the beginning had required me to prepare for the "expected" traumatizing, physically- and mentally-damaging abuses to happen to the characters. In other words, going in, I was fully prepared to quickly skim through to the end. However, when I finally reached the point of Tom and Hermione's reconciliation(s), my sigh of relief was much louder than the anticipated feelings of joy (which was also felt, of course).
But, of course, I could very well be that ONE reader who payed an unneeded amount of attention to well-meaning precautions and if that was the case, I apologize for bringing such an alarm to the "Note of Worth."
Moving on to an even more opinionated topic, the "Original Ending" was MUCH better, ROMANCE-wise, than the ending you finally chose to substitute into the actual fanfic, and in terms of angst, it was undoubtedly bittersweet. In more ways than one, I absolutely adored the way you had left the readers the closure you had forgone with Hermione's "epilogue" on the "Original Ending" than in the "Final Ending," yet still, both were amazing in their own ways.
To conclude this much-too-lengthy ramble, I would just like to formally thank you for posting this fanfic and KEEPING IT POSTED, since while the journey had been an emotion one, it was worthwhile. So thank you, Speechwriter, for your writing, and I highly anticipate your return from the haitus (if possible).
| Vernoodle chapter 1 . 5/26/2015
Oh, much better ending ;)
| LadyBadass chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
So... Why did you never bother telling me about this?
Once again *Insert Dandy gif*
Like, at first I was just like "no bitch". I guess I have just adjusted to the thought of Tom dying in this story, and I felt like it completed it so well. So at first I was utterly skeptical when reading this. However in this story I felt like Hermione wasn't completely isolated from the rest of the world.
No matter how much I love the first ending I read, the one you have added to the the original Tied for Last, I can't help myself but wish that Hermione experienced some of the justice she got in this original version.
I understand really well why none of the Weasleys would want to speak to her, and I also know that you stated that they eventually warmed up to her, I just wish it was clearer.
I always look back at this story and I get goosebumps. I wish I didn't also have that chill running down my spine by the thought of the ending. It made an incredible impact and I find it difficult to not feel emotional about it to this day.
I don't know, you're just amazing at writing. I have my english exam in a couple of days, and I am just sitting here, staring at the screen of my laptop and thinking "Why can't I write this well?!". I do hope that you are taking advantage of that ability to this day, cause I believe I wouldn't be the only one that would enjoy an original story written by you. :)
| sher-loki-lock chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
YAY! This is the better ending. I don't know why but I'm a sucker for happy endings. And this is perfect. Couldn't ask for anything better. x
| ChaosSeiroFreedomfromrulesnin chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
i like this ending better