Reviews for That Butler, on Vacation
roseusvortex chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
Hehe. This is something that Ciel would definitely do. When I saw the title I was wary. Sebastian would never take vacation. But I was wrong to be wary. Everyone is in perfectly character. Lol. The egg scene. :)
London Maeve chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Great story so far! Maylene isn't the maids' name, though- it's Mey-Rin.
Shipping-in-Progress chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
I thought the story was adorable, and I loved all the characters in it! Ceil was so helpless without Sebastian and Lizzie was cute as always. So all in all, I loved it!
Pandatryoshka chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
-dies laughing- Oh my freaking blue bunny eating carrot!
Silly Ciel!
T-S-P is a teaspoon!
-whacks Ciel on the head-
And you survived because...
Elizabeth didn't eat your soul, like I do.
-noms on his soul-
Yummeh. Now you shall die.
Shinei, little twelve year old! And yes, I get to boss you around because I'm older than you. So there, haha.
XxXMuzikLuverXxX chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Hahaha good story. I can't believe Ciel actually had his nail done. Ahahaha loved it.
marmalade bunny chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
i enjoyed reading it, it is a fun piece!

ciel baking and getting a manicure! who would have thought!

looking forward to more from you :)
Reading-and-Bubbling chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
A lovely first line. Very gripping, and yet very sarcastic. Nice job with this one.

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Frida-Froz chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
I couldnt help but take a look )

At first I thought when you said one-shot at the summary it was a CielXSebastian haha I was really shocked you would write this at first! XP

But hey great Kuroshitsuji story _
promocat chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
poor ciel!LOL!
emirozus chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
BAW, that was kind of cute, the whole Ciel/Sebastian friendship bonding whatever thing. Cute ending!

'I never thought that a day without Sebastian could be so disastrous...'

Pretty good first line; introducing the story and making the reader say "is it really that hard to live a day without one dude?" I liked it.

Anyway, minimal grammar mistakes, but all in all a very good story! It made me laugh, hahahaha. Great submission, thank you again!


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