Reviews for Dancing Rose Petals
Guest chapter 5 . 3/21/2014
que lindo yakuya y los tres el bebe y rin y sesshoumaru fantastic como dicen los gringos jeje
Little sneak chapter 5 . 7/15/2013
This made squeal in delight after I read thisXD!
Emandylyn S chapter 5 . 5/22/2012
Dancing Rose Petals is a cute story and well written, but...

Moments like which you wrought about in this chapter (5) are sacred and should be kept that way, and it is inappropriate to write of such an intimate married behavior.

I believe it would be wise to change the rating of your story, so that people who don't feel comfortable with such things don't mistakenly think it's safe to read.

Forgive me for pointing this out.
Y chapter 5 . 4/29/2012
gasp! they copulated! :O shouldn't that part be rated M?

ah, they had a baby. not a fan of Sarea though. i wish they had a kick ass name. XD

ah, the first of sweet.i love when sess/rin have like a bazillion kids if you havent noticed. so will we meet the rest? lmao, jk jk. unnecesary epilogue, i think, but still. cute to read.

great. :)
Sunset'90 chapter 5 . 4/28/2012

Di is back on the roll!

See this chapter explains exactly why Di should start writing again, It was awesome!...

Starting from the first line : "Mostly anyways :P " made me smirk :P to the ending

... I just love Byakuya in this story... His reaction in the wedding and ofcourse the childbirth :)was hilarious :).

I love the way wrote about their passionate first night together! Wish other writers could write like this... but many writers are just keen to write some lemon without any element of love or passion in it... I hate them...

Thanks for coming back...

Love you Di ... You're the best! :)
Moonlight Mermaid chapter 4 . 3/28/2012
Very amusing, I liked :D
ayamechin chapter 2 . 12/25/2011
rin had 8yrs old when she saw sesshomaru last time, and met him again y yrs later, so she has now 15yrs old - i am fine with that.

That brother of her should know that his plan will back fire on him - somehow i pity him.
ayamechin chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
Rin has a very protective brother. I wonder what he will do if he will discover Rin and his best friend in the same bed. I guess I need to read further.

But why sesshomaru did not sensed her scent? isn't he a mighty dog?
browneyed-mahoutsukai chapter 4 . 12/18/2011
love this story! sesshoumaru waiting for Rin is just very sweet :)
DreamOrNightmare chapter 4 . 10/1/2011
This is good nd a lil funny haha(: So ur ending it now? Well, hopefully you'll post up more stories!(:
NekoxUsa chapter 4 . 9/26/2011
Luv it! Update plz! Thanks again.

Love the plot it is amazing and your word choice is awesome.


moonlightshadow1 chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
Very good a few grammatical errors but that about it.
YinactiveY chapter 4 . 8/27/2011
AWww sess is so overprotective even from her own

Sess was already engaged to Rin and Byakuya agreed! Haha nice, he seems to trust Sess a lot.

Sess mother reaction to bya's wailing was bya, his baby sis is all grown up now and going to live with Sess..

nice to see you finished your story.. -
pammazola chapter 4 . 8/27/2011
That was absolutely fantabulous Rosie! I wouldn't mind you leaving it like this! *sigh* Fave!
Sunset'90 chapter 4 . 8/27/2011
I remember reading this story in a hurry a long time back and forgot to review coz i had to go to college...

Wonderful story! I'm waiting for the epilogue and all ur other stories' updates ... Can't wait...
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