Reviews for Bruised & Battered
marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 1/12
Alright well that escaleted quickly
leobutler chapter 16 . 4/14/2014
But what is the connection between Tim and Vance?
Saissa chapter 16 . 8/30/2013
God abby - you and your whining and your fussiness make me sick.
You really do lay on the family side of the story. It is kind of way over the top for my liking, but that's OK. This is your story. However, I am looking forward to reading your sequel.

Yes, Gibbs - Abby DOES need to get a few headslaps - I dont care if she thinks it is abuse - it is long past time you STOPPED treating her like the favourite! THAT is what is making her a spoiled clingy whining brat!

I see this team as a very DYSFUNCTIONAL family - with constant and ongoing manipulation, physical and emotional abuse, bullying and being spoiled rotten - by which I mean someone has never been told about the consequences of her actions.
Saissa chapter 11 . 8/30/2013
Tim may be the youngest chronologically, but he sure acts like the oldest in maturity..

Abby acts like the youngest - she acts like a child and that really pisses me off.
Saissa chapter 9 . 8/30/2013
OMG 12 hours stuck on the floor - that is just awful!

I would be going nuts if I were forced to lie there and not being able to read - especially if I can see my books but cant reach them!
Saissa chapter 8 . 8/30/2013
Yes Jo, Abby really did tell McGee that she loved him like a puppy.

I dont know why McGee still pines after Abby. She is clearly incapable of loving him in any other way. A puppy is just something to play with - so that means McGee is just a play toy...

McGee needs to open his eyes, stop pining for Abby and find someone else!
Saissa chapter 7 . 8/30/2013
The dogs name could easily be shortened to JET - and in most fics that is the name that is used. Abby hates it, but the dog doesnt belong to Abby any more!
Saissa chapter 6 . 8/30/2013
that's OK.

I'm from down-under, and most americans have never heard of paracetomol - just your normal OTC painkiller!

The equivalent in Canada and the USA is tylenol LOL

Morphine as always can only be prescibed by the doctor
Saissa chapter 2 . 8/30/2013
...and was devastated...

That is so not the right word to describe Abby. To put it bluntly - Abby goes into Panic mode big time every time someone gets hurt.

It is actually pretty horrible to watch - a 40 something year old woman panicking everytime someone in her "family" gets hurt..
midknightmist chapter 16 . 1/17/2013
great story. love tim whumping. thanks for sharing.
purplehaz97 chapter 10 . 1/6/2013
Oops...To bad we DON'T have that in the USA.
purplehaz97 chapter 9 . 1/6/2013
Oh, poor Tim! Entonox? Sounds like good stuff. To bad we have that here in the USA.
MoonlitShadowsoftheHumanSoul chapter 6 . 1/4/2013
Chp. 6. FINALLY!Backstory! I always thought his family was like that! Imma keep reading!
earthdragon chapter 16 . 11/22/2012
I've just found this old story after checking out your profile. It's really good and I love the way you have the team interacting as a family. I would also be interested in a follow-up story about the apparent relationship between Tim and Vance.
SpiritWriterXXX chapter 4 . 8/12/2012
kate, way to protect our favorite probie
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