Reviews for Fake Smiles
Whalien52 chapter 2 . 6/30/2017
So sad :( but still it was really well written
Zinniaa chapter 2 . 9/15/2015
Choked up...
klkelly chapter 2 . 10/15/2013
Oh my gosh, I have tears in my eyes, this story is so sad, though in my opinion, natsumes point of view is so much sadder! ;( I think I'm crying, wow, great story though. I loved it no matter how sad it was.
guest chapter 2 . 9/26/2013
this is just sad TT-TT i am not a big fan of sad endings but this story is just great and i loved it
natsume you fool you sadist i will curse you
mikan why... you just have to kill yourself TTTT
this is so cruel
Meepyonnee chapter 2 . 7/26/2013
Beautiful alternate ending. I'm not much of a fan of unhappy endings, but I loved this one. What the Academy did to Mikan was just too cruel. Natsume's sincere love didn't keep me from cursing his idiocy though.
Mystique0831 chapter 2 . 5/22/2013
This was freaking sad T.T I know this is really a very late review, but hey, I just want to write this. :((((
Psycho Chunnibyou chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
T_T NOOOO!
x-x chapter 2 . 1/3/2013
natsume's pov left me crying Q.Q
MiaShioriTheNotSoSilentReader chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
NOOOOOO! Mikan! YOU CAN'T DIE! -cries- ;-; —after a few seconds...— OwO Your story is SO unique(in a good way) and Im so speechless btw! Wait... If I'm speechless... Then why am I TALKING?! O–O LoL XD
sakuraXnatsume chapter 2 . 11/17/2012
I like this story. It makes people think.
A-DiDDy101 chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
Wow... This is pretty sad. I really like it though. It's really different and unique.
SugarADdIccT chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
OMG! She died! NNOOO! I still loved it! You gave an awesome twist to the story!

See ya ;)
SugarADdIccT chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Don't tell me she's going to die! I didn't know Mikan is that easily depressed...omg!

See ya ;)
xXColoring outside the linesXx chapter 2 . 6/6/2012
Aahh man Mikan died! that was so sad! I felt like i was actually in their place and i felt my heart being tugged on! i always read angsty so im pretty used to all the sad stories! But im not emo or goth! i just use the feelings that i felt when reading this and use it for acting! i actually cried! I would feel really betrayed to find out that my whole life is fake! and also being used! Tch thats why i would start to be close friends with the guy i like/love and to get to know

them better and to strengthen the bond and trust before i date them! awsome fanfic! You have many potential!

- Fly on

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xXColoring outside the linesXx chapter 2 . 6/6/2012
Aahh man Mikan died! that was so sad! I felt like i was actually in their place and i felt my heart being tugged on! i always read angsty so im pretty used to all the sad stories! But im not emo or goth! i just use the feelings that i felt when reading this and use it for acting! i actually cried! I would feel really betrayed to find out that my whole life is fake! and also being used! Tch thats why i would start to be close friends with the guy i like/love and to get to know

them better and to strengthen the bond and trust before i date them! awsome fanfic! You have many potential!

- Fly on

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