Reviews for And the World Turns 'Round
acomplexgirlwithsimpletastes chapter 1 . 5/22
Hi. I am a relatively die-hard Dramione fan (don't hate) but. But. I suppose, if canon must be followed, and my ship must be sunk, this love story between Astoria and Draco (dear god, the rabid fans of my fandom, do not descend!) is not a bad way to go. In fact, it's really quite entirely lovely, and you have an eager new fan. I wish you more awakenings at 2am and more itches to write at school or work, if only we get to see more of your writing. Kudos.
blahblahblahwatermellon chapter 7 . 5/20
That was amazing! I loved how you transformed Draco!
Darkness' Embrace chapter 7 . 4/14
This was so so beautiful. Thank you so much for writing this pairing with the gravity and depth of emotion that is necessary for the dark times these characters experienced. Reading this felt like reading a great love story - the type that spans time and space. Your Draco is so perfect, strong in the the ways that I always imagined he would be, but weak in the ways that make him human. I also thought the somewhat violent scene at the party, while distasteful for Draco fans to read, was absolutely a pivotal plot point and really well done. You masterfully show how good people do bad things, and how, most of all, some of the best, most amazing acts of grace are committed by the villain of the story.
untiltheskyfallsdownonme chapter 1 . 3/8
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Guest chapter 7 . 2/12
OMG IT WAS SOOO WELL WRITTEN AND HEART-BREAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL ! LOVED it !
You Might Say I'm Crazy chapter 7 . 2/7
This is my #1 Drastoria fanfic of all time, and I don't say that lightly. :D I've read dozens, verging on hundreds, of Drastoria fics and your's is the best one to capture Draco's horrifying attitude as a child and adolescent and also how he was changed and transformed after the War. You portray Draco so amazingly in character the entire time, and yet don't make me want to smack him in the face. So thank you so much, I look forward to reading anything else you publish.
untiltheskyfallsdownonme chapter 7 . 12/28/2015
This is the first Draco/Astoria fanfic I've ever read and it is absolutely amazing!
Believe it or not I've read this awesome fanfic for like 5 times already. Thanks for sharing this great work of yours
Sk chapter 7 . 10/28/2015
I love this, I am crying. Oh gosh
Guest chapter 7 . 3/11/2015
Wow. Just wow. Great writing style. You've crafted an excellent story. What makes it so good is that its about more than just love. Its about redemption. You've shown realistic character growth from both characters, and spun an enjoyable story. Great job!
Kashlazy chapter 6 . 1/24/2015
Reading this for the 2nd time.
I'm actually crying, such a good story. Astoria is such a good person, she is someone that Draco clearly need. I was never a huge fan of HermioneXDraco
kickbuttowskiyeah chapter 7 . 1/5/2015
Malfoy's afraid of holding his own son. That really sounds like him.
kickbuttowskiyeah chapter 4 . 1/5/2015
Wow i never thought malfoy would think like that, it was naive, and acceptable, and suited him. It suited every thing he does, it suited to be the reasons of why he does everything he does. This ks what romance should be like, especially for people who's as difficult as malfoy. They wouldn't have any warm relationships, just, less cold. This is brilliant. But may i ask why you choose for astoria to be parted 3 years below him? In other sources she's only two years below him and daphne.
kickbuttowskiyeah chapter 3 . 1/5/2015
I like the relationship between the greengrass sisters, not so close you'd think it's impossible and embarrassing and tacky, but not as distinctive that astoria is left alone. You created a very balanced atmosphere here. Usually the main character is left alone, no friends at all and being hated by her entire family. No corny relationships, love it
kickbuttowskiyeah chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
That sounds like malfoy alright, I'm glad someone finally wrote a romance story of him for who he is. The fact that he won't change from a cocky jerk to a caring person for just one girl who's younger than he is. I like the sound of it, thank you for posting this.
notanalpaca chapter 7 . 11/30/2014
Stunning writing. I love the original idea.
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