Reviews for My Secrets are only shared with you
luluw5 chapter 2 . 11/7/2013
Ok a few things, mostly technical. For dialogue, tell us who is talking when. Just the last part. And please, autocorrect or spell check or whatever you use, turn it back on. The only thing I saw that couldn't be fixed by those two is Sinnoh. S-i-n-n-o-h. Sometimes spelled S'innoh. That is all
Guest chapter 5 . 10/14/2013
Guest chapter 3 . 5/14/2013
This is a cute story but paul is sooooo OOC
Guest chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
nice i do want to know what happend in the week she had
Cathrinejennings2015 chapter 5 . 12/7/2012
awww how cute paul had a heart
Eeveexme chapter 5 . 12/7/2012
Awesome story!

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Chuck Norris is awssome chapter 2 . 7/27/2012
its spelled sinnoh and persian ok?
Sorry not telling chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
becauseimstupid chapter 3 . 12/27/2011
i like the plot and story but then i found a lot of grammer mistakes on each chapter that i read so far.
writlings chapter 5 . 8/23/2011
Such a cute story! *_* Me likey! :)
Monochrome13 chapter 3 . 8/12/2011
Awww Paul has as a sweet side...! Cute
Monochrome13 chapter 2 . 8/12/2011
Lolz.. You enjoyed it Dawn !
LD-2015 chapter 5 . 8/10/2011
awwww i love stories if it has fluffs! but i go to the serious types if it has good storylines. Well, they is be lying to Dawn's mother!
LD-2015 chapter 4 . 8/10/2011
wow weavile. lolz. he was about to curse!
LD-2015 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
i love the way that this treeko acts! listening to an mp3? likes twinkets? lolz.
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