|Reviews for Finding: Trust|
| lost.in.elysium chapter 13 . 11/29/2013
Very interesting! I wonder what Abaddon meant by his last words. He won't be there for what, and who does he want Lililtu to take care of? And if Lililtu wants to avenge his death, that cannot be good. I have a feeling the Pevensies and Narnia will be in danger once again.
| Elfera chapter 13 . 11/9/2013
And someone's dead, cool!
| COTK95 chapter 12 . 7/1/2013
Loved the story and can't wait for the next part! I'll definitely have to keep an eye out for it. Anyways, keep up the good work!
| Cinija Nicija chapter 12 . 4/7/2013
The story is noce but the way you divide it into three archs and re-post things left and right is kind of...confusing. But I would like to see how it ends, certainly.
Awww, blind Edmund. Fluff levels goes up and up, doesn't it? ;-)
| lost.in.elysium chapter 12 . 3/23/2013
I'm sad that the story has ended but I'm glad that another installation will be added. I knew you couldn't have ended off here! Even though it's the end of this story, it is the beginning of the other. I'm happy that everything turned out alright but I still feel that something bad might happen in the continuation of this. However, I might be wrong. I suppose I'll have to read to find out. :)
Congratulations on completing yet another great story. I'm looking forward to the next one!
| lost.in.elysium chapter 11 . 3/23/2013
I think Tarik was brave because of what he did because he did go against what Tresa wanted, which was to avenge Jadis by killing Edmund. I wonder what caused Tarik's change of heart bu at least he gets a second chance. I like how Tarik is a traitor in a way, like Edmund, and how Edmund was able to forgive him and give him a second chance despite what he did. Edmund, and Tarik, were in similar positions, both exhibiting betrayal. Maybe Edmund was thinking about his own betrayal when he said that Tarik deserved a second chance.
| Hain degistirildi chapter 12 . 3/19/2013
Lovely as always!
| narniadreamer1 chapter 12 . 3/18/2013
wouldnt that work if i went back and reviewed on all the other chapters right now? anyways that was great! im glad that its not over i wouldnt know what to do if it was :)
| Elfera chapter 12 . 3/18/2013
That was a nice ending!
| Allie Danger chapter 12 . 3/18/2013
Ooohhhhh, keep writinggg please :)
I loved this story :)
Poor ed, is he blind?
| MCH chapter 12 . 3/18/2013
Like how you ended it not a happy ever after, I always say that Aslan lets things happen for a reason which ultimately helps those involved in the event. There are still things for Edmund Tumnus his siblings the Narnian and I think for Tarik to learn. Maybe even Aslan as well as the deeper magic can move in mystery way for us all.
Good your not finishes this story.
| MCH chapter 11 . 3/18/2013
Wonder if it was Tarik who was hurting Edmund when he was in the witches prison?
Glad Tarik gets a second chance.
| Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 12 . 3/18/2013
Nicely set up. Many writers, professional as well as amateur, cannot figure out how to decently write a story in a way that allows for the next part of a larger arc, and finishes off a mini-arc of its own.
I really liked the ending. Ed's moment with Aslan at the end seemed to give this mini-arc an end, but the story still goes on.
| Allie Danger chapter 11 . 3/6/2013
| bookchomper101 chapter 11 . 3/4/2013
oops, sorry, completely didn't realize that it wasn't enabled. heh heh heh. *blushes* now im embarassed.
Thanks for the advice, ive posted the first chapter of my story. If you want to read it, it's a crossover between hunger games and circle of magic.
I love what you did with tarik. It was awesome!