Reviews for Ruin
eirame chapter 1 . 5/20
Mental and efficient : that is one scary girl. Especially with her horse from the Apocalypse.
Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Aloever chapter 1 . 5/2/2016
This is pretty cool. I like the character and how it's
coincidences that made a lot of things happen. Thanks for sharing!
Creator-Time chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Please tell me you will one day continue this...please? It is intense and amazing and I really want to read more!
HanamiKaze chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Interesting character. Your character is much better than some of the previous OCs I've seen who were on the verge of being a Mary Sue. Making her different from her family and gave her an appearance that was plain to her family makes her stand out. Please update soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Please write more to this story. Depth and body and you could make it an awesome story
phoebe turner chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
i loved it!
Skreech chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
This seems neato! Woot. was this part like a prologue? Will there be more characterization later? I like this.