|Reviews for The Struggle for Control|
| Truth chapter 1 . 3/17
Don't take this the wrong way, but my eyes hurt and my brain is scrambling for answers. Why did you decide o write with caps instead of with italics!? Could you not have found another way of marking the change in character, that didn't involve big annoying letters? I like the general idea but try to structure your words to make them easier to read.
| AllenxEdward chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
I like it... It's awesome!