Reviews for Constant Trouble
Daytonight chapter 21 . 6/26/2013
I wish u would continue with this story because I'm hooked.
Daytonight chapter 17 . 6/26/2013
Who is the father! Love this, and love that ur showing how Alistair is doing. I want Alistair to be suffering as much as Tera, I thought at first he was the father of the child and as I kept reading he wasn't, which was a good surprise. Don't want to think of him being with another woman, it would piss me off :) good job on this chapter can't wait for next !
Daytonight chapter 8 . 6/25/2013
Loving the story! Love that she saw bodahn
SummerAngelz chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
PM me (My account is called SummerAngelz) I just wanted to say...


Shale is a girl

Well specificly she was a dwrven girl before the paragon turned her into a golum and it bugs the shizzle out of me that you put Shale as a guy, so please correct that if you can (you dont have to)

But besides that i love your story and the whole idea, at least you didnt make Alister a complete ass. (I romanced him)
FearaNightmare chapter 21 . 1/26/2013
This is really good! I hope you update soon! It's sooo amazing!
JuMiKu chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
This is a brilliant idea with exceptional execution.

In this chapter there were two things I find unlikely though. I really can't see Carver and Leandra not fighting Flemeth to their last after this. Similarly, if the meeting between the Hawke's and Aveline had happened this way, I very much doubt they would have been able to cooperate.
TheWickedVirgo chapter 20 . 11/5/2012
All right let me just say that I'm 37 years old and I really enjoyed this story so far. Please finish this one. Thanks.
MoonPrincess623 chapter 20 . 10/6/2012
More than amazing story! To be honest, I've played Origins enough to know or guess what happened there. I just want you to focus on this one. A part of me hates that you are jumping around, but the other part is completely and utterly hooked, and just wants more.

Fenris...oh how i love him. I think that he wasn't too OOC in the last bit. I feel if someone he loved was running away he would stop her, especially since he knows that running away is bad. He would want to spare her the pain that he felt (and others felt) when he ran away. I only have to wonder if he is still on that dock waiting to see if she jumps back and swims for him.

Till next time!
Allyria Waters chapter 20 . 7/21/2012
I really loved this story. I wish it could continue...
Cibiripilli chapter 20 . 2/22/2012
Carver is an ass..and I can understand Leandra pain really but why te hell she always blame Hawke? The only one in the family who treat you well is Bethany..too bad I like to play mage characters..XD I like how you showed a different side of helps understand how deeply they changed each other.. good chap!:)
MissLizziebeth chapter 20 . 2/21/2012
Wow, I didn't think it was possible, but you actually made me dislike Leandra a bit - she acted like such a bitch toward her when it was HER fault! Anywho :D Oh! By the by, you wrote lithium rather than lyrium - and it IS recognized as a word, Miss Lazy! :P Loved the chappy, keep writing xxx
LifeandFire25 chapter 20 . 2/21/2012
Lol love it with typos and all. I like how you put in there her old life with alistair.
Cibiripilli chapter 19 . 2/19/2012
Well you definitely have a lot of talent so you have to to nurture it! I'm glad you decided to continue it and I'm really curious about your origin story as well but I love this one and I never had the feeling that something was missing it's perfect as it is!
bakaprincess85 chapter 19 . 2/17/2012
Oh thank the Maker I found this fic! I've wanted to read a good story with Warden/Fenris for a long time! Even though there's not a lot said about their story yet, I can't wait to read more about it! Please update soon! I can't wait to see Fenris' reaction when she returns to him... swimming back to Kirkwall! lol, that was a great idea!
Allyria Waters chapter 19 . 2/17/2012
Great chapter! I really liked how Tera finally was able to face her fears and realize that she was running away again from everything she loves. Reminiscing about what has happened to her friends in Ferelden made me feel sad because I felt her pain of having abandoned them. I love how at the end she doesn't ask the boat to turn around and take her back but she throws herself in the water and takes control of her own destiny. I really hope to see more of the story :)
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