Reviews for Lost
OoJuliaoO chapter 41 . 5/3
this is some awesome story. I really like the idea and the development! I would love to read another chapter and hope that you maybe will update in the near future!
deangirl1985 chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
Please please please! Write more! I have been reading this beautiful story over and over, hoping that you will write more.
Hope you are well, and hope you have a lovely day! :D
rma24601 chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Please continue writing this story again.
sorsnape chapter 41 . 10/19/2013
and... whats up?
continueeeee!
you have to finish!
Goddess Alexandria chapter 41 . 9/5/2013
I'm really hoping for more.
Goddess Alexandria chapter 32 . 9/5/2013
Harry fought Devils Snare in his first year with Hermione and Ron, he would have known what to do.
Ali chapter 5 . 6/15/2013
OMG!
Lets try those links again hmm?
I'll put spaces in front of each "dot" this time.

"There are sites that you can use to check spelling &/or the meanings of words,
the ones I use the most are:

dictionary .reference .com
&
thesaurus .com

In saying that you can also just use google .com .au
& type in the words your wanting to use & it will come up with the correct spelling as well as the meaning in most cases."
Ali chapter 5 . 6/15/2013
LINKS THAT ENDED UP MISSING:

"There are sites that you can use to check spelling &/or the meanings of words,
the ones I use the most are:

.com
&

In saying that you can also just use .au
& type in the words your wanting to use & it will come up with the correct spelling as well as the meaning in most cases."
Ali chapter 5 . 6/15/2013
I really wanted to read this fic, but I literally had to force myself to get this far.

What I'm about to say is not ment to be hurtful, it's simply being said to try & help you write better so it might seem a bit harsh Ok?

You really need to fix things like this:

"Ron gasped and took a hasty step back! Hermione swung around in alarm! Electrifying sparks bounced dangerously off the floor! The violet potion had streaks of gold spreading across it! There was a sudden smell of burning! Then a loud bang! Puffs of topaz smoke!"

It simply has far to many apostrophes ("!") & it reads/flows badly, it would read better if it was something along the line of:

"Ron gasped taking a quick step back as Hermione spun around in alarm.
Elecrtifying sparks bounced dangerously off the stone floor & the violet coloured potion had large flecks of gold spreading through-out it.
Suddenly there was a vague smell of burning & a loud BANG followed shortly after by puffs of topaz smoke."

The word "Vague" means:
Vague;
Adjective:
1) Of uncertain, indefinite, or unclear character or meaning: "patients with vague symptoms".
2) Thinking or communicating in an unfocused or imprecise way: "he had been vague about his activities".

Also you need to get someone to go back through & check that you have the correct words in place, like the following:

"Snape wasn't there so they were going to relinquish this, relinquish this rare moment of achievement."

The word "Relinquish" means:
Re·lin·quish;
Verb: Voluntarily cease to keep or claim; give up.
Synonyms: abandon - renounce - give up - quit - waive - leave.

The word that you are after here is infact "Relish":

Relish;
Verb:
1) to savour or enjoy (an experience) to the full
2) to anticipate eagerly; look forward to
Noun:
1) liking or enjoyment, as of something eaten or experienced (esp in the phrase with relish )
2) pleasurable anticipation (eg: he didn't have much relish for the idea).

There are sites that you can use to check spelling &/or the meanings of words,
the ones I use the most are:

&
/

In saying that you can also just use . /
& type in the words your wanting to use & it will come up with the correct spelling as well as the meaning in most cases.

Keep writing alright? I enjoyed the plot, but it was a little bit hard to find under everything else.

I hope you found this helpful & that you will go back & re-write this fic.
It would be wonderful to come back & not have to force my way through it.
Again, what I've said was ment to be helpful & not hurtful.
If anything I said WAS hurtful to you, then I apologize.

Looking forward to future works!
Mystical G Panther chapter 41 . 11/27/2012
Hey! Cool story! Update really soon eh?
:)
aliengirlguy chapter 41 . 10/25/2012
awesome fic! i look forward to the next chap!
GoddessonmyKnees chapter 41 . 10/6/2012
Great story. I am really enjoying it. I really like Death's challenges. I also like Charlie and Draco.

I can't wait for more.
revengerufus chapter 41 . 10/2/2012
I love the trials you are putting Severus through.
13AkiraKuranXIII chapter 41 . 9/30/2012
Brilliant! I can't wait for more.
FireSenshi2 chapter 41 . 9/30/2012
I missed this story! Definitely extremely eager for the next chapter! Update soon?!
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