Reviews for The replacement captain: Ichigo Kurosaki |
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![]() ![]() More please |
![]() ![]() You brought up that byakuya thinks ichigo is common born but he’s actually the ranking head of the noble Shiba family and he doesn’t even know it yet neither does anyone else except the shihoin family and the Shiba family elder members being ishin and kukaku Shiba are you going to bring that fact to attention of the other characters including byakuya? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good. I'd say I only had two complaints. One was Ichigo becoming a noble after the fact that it'd be useful at all and then was just kinda dropped to a joke and one that wasn't even used that often. The second was Rukia becoming Captain. The whole point of her learning Bankai and participating was to prove she could stand beside him. Becoming Captain meant she could no longer do that and thus defeated the entire purpose. Not only would it be insanely rare for them to ever work together on assignment but their own duties would keep them completely separated most of the time until it was effectively time to go home. Since the only reason some of the other Captains even have the time they have is because they ignore responsibilities to shove it onto their lieutenant or other squad members. Or in the case of Ukitake, his two third seats step up to do it since he's sick a lot. Neither of them are either type so contact becomes extremely mitigated until they got actually married and lived together and even then it would be reduced by a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shihoin Ichigo. Well, You were really close in your decision to make it a major clan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like by the time you wrote this part it was already revealed that Isshin was a noble of the 5 great clans. While TYBW would totally throw this story off in of itself. Isshin being a Shiba by itself doesn't. |
![]() ![]() in this story is he just cleaning up 60 through 80 of the south district or are you just making it so that 60 through 80 are the south districts *thinking face* |
![]() ![]() Yamamoto - Ichigo for the defeat of Aizen one of our greatest enemies we would like you to become a captain of the gotei 13. all the other captains - *now he'll have to face the greatest enemy since the creation of the gotei 13... paperwork.* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying it so far! |
![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's dope af |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for the story! really like the characterization of everyone and the action is a lot of fun |
![]() ![]() ![]() i brake her jaw seriously lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() yourichi big suclant black tities and bush lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() grow up ichigow grow up she was hurting like you were |
![]() ![]() ![]() Muy interesante |