Reviews for TCOT Felonious Financier
Guest chapter 12 . 1/30
loved the ending. i thought jason would win.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/29
i think jason's wife did it.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/29
where's della?
Guest chapter 8 . 1/29
like where you're going. eva beltzer type?
Guest chapter 6 . 1/27
i'm guessing first time.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/27
really have to wonder if something else is wrong.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/26
so far, so good. i'm fascinated.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/25
can he fix this one without getting hurt by jason cooper.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/25
here we go again! almost like t.v. your writing make the story see-able.
murphycat chapter 12 . 3/19/2013
I like this adult, no bs version, of the couple. It's not too flowery but mature and really well written. Good plot line; kept me interested.
murphycat chapter 10 . 3/19/2013
Oh, another great chapter. Wow. How did I miss this story?
murphycat chapter 7 . 3/19/2013
I like your peppy Della and I admire the way you've done this entire story so far. I mean I really like it. I have read other writer's but I think your style is less circular and fairly clean and direct.
murphycat chapter 6 . 3/19/2013
Good chapter.
murphycat chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
Good chapter. What's the previous story? I gotta read the "Mexico" part. :)
StartWriting chapter 12 . 10/2/2012
I read it again. Loved the whole story, really. But the 'cocoa-bit' in this chapter was brilliant, really brilliant. Thanks for sharing!
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