Reviews for Izaya's Discontent
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Omg the feelings thank you do much for this it is epic made me feel them x3
Dark knightress chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
Aw, this was very good.
La Vita a Colori chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Fabulous! Simply fabulous! I don't know why this doesn't have more reviews. ;3;
remioromen1344 chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Oh my gosh, I loved this. It was amazing in every way. :) 333
Rinnesuke chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Uwahh I can almost feel the confusion that Izaya is feeling.
Solaris chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
I don't usually review, but I really liked this piece. The scenario is believable and I can picture it all with clarity; the emotions set were perfect in my opinion.

Wonderful work.
Runic Healer chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Don't post lyrics on a story. It's violating a copyright infringement law that lawyers can look into and use as evidence to shut down FFnet.

I suggest removing the lyrics and simply tell the reader to listen to a specific song as he/she reads the story. Your story's mood will be better if the reader will listen to the song instead of reading it as he/she progresses through the story. If you're familiar with "'Dying Message' a Durarara! Fanfic", the author uses this tactic in writing.
animeg chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Wahh! so awesome! It was hot and fluffy at the same time! Though I was a lil sad that Shizu-chan didn't return the feelings...but he said he would...and he was desprate to hear Izaya confess (while they were doing it)...So that just shows that he'll say it soon! XD

I loved it!
slasheddream chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
adsfjkljasa daw. u

There, you made my brain mush. Happy? D: