|Reviews for A Cracked and Clouded Mirror|
| furious kitten chapter 12 . 12/17/2011
I like the Bella and Rose created an alliance so quickly. Bella needs someone on her side for support.
| edwardcu77en7over chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
It seems Edward is going to realize their bond sooner than Bella, huh? Why she dislikes him so much? He has always tried to help her :/
| AH Darling chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
Rose hates Edward, too? Wow, that poor dude just CANNOT win, LOL.
And yeah, your Bella isn't my fav but I get that you are in-process here. Usually it's the Edward that is the complete asshole (and he has almost always had sex with every walking female as well...ick) so I think that being patient with this Bella is doable! ; )
Thanks so much for the update!
| Azlady2003 chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
Both of them need to realize they are mAtes
| blueeyes11354 chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
I suppose if nothing else she'll have to learn how to use her gift out of necessity. Perhaps that's the best way? We'll see. :)
| Edlovesme chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
Perfect timing, I was just thinking about this yesterday.
| Beanie Cullen chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
Loved meeting Rosalie & Emmett and how everything played out. It's cool that Rose feels protective of Bella and is trying to help.
I feel bad for Bella. She's been through a whole bunch and is trying to come to terms with a newborn's sensibilities. Add to that the hot know-it-all who seems to have everything under control while she continues to struggle and oh yeah, she's the key to saving everyone and has to figure out how to do that in under a month. Um, but no pressure or anything. Here at the end of the chapter it seems glaringly obvious Bella's really feeling the pressure.
Love the story and how you're building everything. Lots of lovely tension and suspense :)
| aerobee82 chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
*snort* Yeah, Bella's bugging the shit out of me. But I can deal. I really liked Jasper's talk with Edward. He was able to put a few things in perspective for him, I bet. I was surprised at first, that Rosalie would form such a bond to Bella so soon, but it makes sense. And I really like Emmett so far, too.
| rubell chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
wow...bella really has a lot of growing up to do...but i kmow she will get there eventually...i cannot wait for her and edwards relationship to grow...
| katinki chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
i loved the intro to rosalie. really loved how you showed that. :D wonderful chapter!
thanks for writing.
| LibraryLady08 chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
I like how Rosalie and Bella bonded from the start and Emmett is very much a favorite. :)
| nurseroxy chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
I'm really enjoying this story. Loved the introduction to Emmett and Rosie and their hillbilly ways. Bella has yet to get on my nerves, so I guess I'll stick with the story!
| Maplestyle chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
With regards to Bella and Edward's relationship well they do say that Rome wasn't built in a day. I find nothing wrong with the pacing of this story or the slow progression of their relationship at all!
Great chapter, Rosalie wasn't at all what I expected once she warmed up to Bella. I thought for sure she'd be harder for a lot longer then she was. Can't wait to read more!
| Bow to your sensei chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
Oh, I can handle a little bit of "annoying Bella"...
| TLammy chapter 12 . 12/16/2011
Good chapter. Rose bonding with and protecting Bella is a nice touch ;) Glad Edward and Bella are working together. Thanks for the update.