|Reviews for A Cracked and Clouded Mirror|
| whilewewereyetsinners chapter 16 . 4/19/2014
Just found this tonight and love it-it's such an interesting premise. I realized after I started that it's been a long time since you posted, and I hope you plan on finishing it. Or posting an outline so we can see what happens. ;)
| NoAccountLurker chapter 16 . 12/21/2013
I just found this story and went ahead and read, knowing it has been awhile since you updated. This is really GOOD! Well paced and it barrels along like a freight train. Must beg you to at least get the big fight scene written and posted (hey, its only the climax to the whole story right?). You mentioned in the a/n you would finish so I'm holding out hope and putting you on alerts. Merry Christmas or happy holidays or joyous Ramadan or whatever you please!
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 16 . 10/28/2013
It was really good while it lasted, With any luck maybe it will be finished.
| Ana Cecilia chapter 16 . 9/25/2013
Hi it's been a while since your last post I was wondering if you think about finishing this fic. Please let me know. Take care
| Anita chapter 3 . 6/13/2013
Wow, this is different, fabulous. Thank you.
| Camilla10 chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
I liked the story and they werespeaking of in on A different Story. But you haven't updated since September, while you wrote something else instead. A real pity.
| barbie23 chapter 16 . 11/22/2012
hi there. I understand from your updating dates that you're having a bit of a hard time... I just wanted to say that i really liked the story and the relationship btw edward and bella, even if there were times that i just wanted to bang their heads together!
I'll be waiting for the next chapter:)
| jujubakiller chapter 3 . 10/13/2012
Man, this johan guy is a creeepy dude. Is he kidnaping women so they can get pregnant with hybrids? If that his porpouse, I really hope Alice gets to her first.
| jujubakiller chapter 2 . 10/13/2012
So, you're definitely getting it one more time: this story is VERY intriguing!
Alice is trying to build some kind of future that is dependent on Bella? Is she the one that's sending Bella the letters? I don't think so, I really got the impression it was a male. But, I really an't be sure. I'm glad there's a lot of chapter for me too read at once!
Do you have an update schedule?
| rubell chapter 16 . 9/26/2012
ahhhhhh...first of all, thank you for putting the summary at the top, i did not read chapters 14&15 until now but ifihadthe summary would have been most helpful...
| rubell chapter 15 . 9/26/2012
yay, bella seems to accept their mating, boo, nauel took alice...nervously biting fingers...
| rubell chapter 14 . 9/26/2012
did she not kiss him on purpose? did kate know about the mutual attraction between bella n edward?
| Holidai chapter 8 . 9/24/2012
Joham is nuts, I am glad Bella has found allies. You can see the mating bond forming in Edward in this chapter. I am glad Bella ultimately agreed.
| Holidai chapter 15 . 9/24/2012
I am glad they are in agreement in being mates. Their mating was wow! So the big fight is coming?
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/21/2012
Can't wait for the fight. I love how Bella is full of piss and vinegar.