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Footlights chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
This captures the tragedy and beauty of the ending so well. To tell a story with such few, sparse words is really extraordinary. And I did feel like I went on an emotional journey with Jerome as I was reading.

I was drawn to the way you laid out the vices he attempts to abuse himself with, how he sees them all as failures because they didn't achieve the result they SHOULD have, just like his genetically perfect self. That last line is going to stay with me for awhile. Very glad I found this!
eirene1988 chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
Wonderful writing
Convenient Alias chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
The short lines are very effective here. My favorite one being "Jerome, Jerome the metronome."
And the last line is pretty final.
Sunny-Blue-Sky chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
I just-
It's so beautiful.
AFreshlyPickedPlum chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
The way you put this together was just BEAUTIFUL. I just... don't have any words to describe this. It's just- clean, and emotional, and moving. This is a masterpiece. Fantastic work.
Nadia chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Gattaca is sucha lovely movie and this is so lovely and tragic and very real. Very haunting. Fantastic work!
Gabrielle chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Rock on, hard core, I can dig it. ;) 3 you baby