|Reviews for At Fate's Hands|
| RandomReader13 chapter 24 . 12/28/2013
End with a Gurren Lagann reference?...
I only have two words to say...Follow Author. love it, and this is becoming one of my favorite crack pairings. Keep it up
| King of Beasts chapter 28 . 10/23/2013
After reading both this and it's prequel, I have to say that my search for an amazing Blazblue fanfic has not been for naught! While I ain't a big RagnaxTsubaki fan (More of RagnaxNoel one, actually), I gotta say that this is one of the most well-written fics I've seen in a while! Hats off to you, good sir, for this wonderful gem! Looking forward to your next update!
| Guest chapter 28 . 9/24/2013
Yes! Terumi finally got the pasting that has been an overly long time in coming. Such a pity, but entirely in character, that he cheaped his way out. Also kinda pumped for the Ragna/Azrael fight, just to see how Rags is going to fight at an even keel with this guy; has it been confirmed just how many release levels Azzy has, or is 2 his maximum?
Just an idea for a romantic scene, or part of one; Tsubaki's know to be a good singer, so next time the two are in a hotel room or suchlike, she can't sleep and starts singing to herself to pass the time, and in doing so wakes him up, and he can pass comment; good bad or snarky.
| Rocketfist chapter 28 . 9/24/2013
*Giggling like a fangirl*
GRR, I mean, this is a manly review!
anyway, I hope at the end will be you're interpretation of Kokonoe joining the fight herself.
I find it interesting you're trading off some character roles who's to become antagonist and supporting protagonist side. Like, there's still way too many hand full of good guys against bad guys, but you're doing great job puting loss and suspense like Carl and Nirvina, possibility indoctrination force under Relius, that worries me.
I know and I like it how your story is around Ragna and Tsubaki is changing this balance of new Chronophantasma time line, but it makes me wonder where Litchi and Arakune.
Other than that, detail of story scenes and sequence is rather smooth so far. Looking forward to next update.
| 002219 chapter 28 . 9/18/2013
Wait, Hakumen was defeated by phenomenal intervention?
You have got to be kidding me.
Haku-men was 'The Hero'. The Antibody, the holder of the Power of Order. He deflects Phenomenal Intervention. He lasted ninety years in the Edge, holding onto his existence when everything else wanted him to die.
If anything tries to change the world, the Power of Order bestows the right and buffs to counter it. Saya wants to destroy the Master Unit. Therefore, Haku-men's power of order should have acted up, point a finger to Saya, and tell him to go screw her over sideways.
Now both the Powers of Order look like pussies in a cardboard box filled with lions.
Dammit. I guess it's my fault, expecting something like that from a Ragna-centric fanfic. What's next, emotional reunion-battle between Noel and Jin?
Oh, and I'm not sure if you know this or not, but if I recall correctly, Hakumen never became lovey-dovey with Tsubaki. They had more time together, yes, she probably had a crush on him, yes, but I don't think they ever went beyond friendship. I think the Jin in that time-loop became traumatized from the Ikaruga War, since in this universe Tenjo was killed in the splash damage of a mortar or something. Thus, he had to earn the rank of Major the hard way.
So in your fanfic, instead of him being a Clingy-Jealous-Guy, as Tv Tropes so eloquently put it, I'd say it's more like that 'overprotective brother frowning over their little sister's boyfriend' stereotype. Hakumen regrets letting Tsubaki die, and thus should be more lenient in letting her choose whatever man she wants, as he didn't exactly have the right to protest.
Disregard this last part if you already know all that. Now, if only Phase Shift 1 will be fully translated soon...
| Some Random Tosser chapter 28 . 9/17/2013
It was so satisfying to see Terumi finally get his arse kicked. As usual, your fight scenes are intense and enthralling but your habit of not leaving a space between an ellipsis and the word after it bugs me.
| Rialga chapter 28 . 9/17/2013
Damn, things sure are reaching the climax and with much gusto too. Sure hope Carl and Luna are able to hold their own against Relius. And Ragna too for that matter against Azrael now that they're both going all out. Never would have thought Ragna would be so outclassed even with the Azure Grimoire active. On the other hand, I'm glad to see Hazama/Terumi get his ass kicked pretty thoroughly by Tsubaki, though I have a feeling that the next time they fight isn't going to be repeat of this battle. She better be on the look out for when he shows up again.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
| mysteriousguy898 chapter 28 . 9/17/2013
At last! I certainly loved the chapter, what with Relius & Co. falling or being unavoidably detained one after another. I wonder where Nu was in all that? Next time, perhaps, however long it takes.
| Scarlet Camellia626 chapter 28 . 9/17/2013
Yay Tsubaki kicked Terumi's butt! Now if only he could stay dead. Well just have to see what happens next time. I wonder what Hazama is going to do fighting with one arm?
| Benevolent Reaper 464 chapter 27 . 4/21/2013
| Otaku97 chapter 27 . 3/30/2013
Best thing in a while
| Rocketfist chapter 27 . 3/28/2013
Boy, coming this far, I love the structure of the unlikely pairing at the start of your first story Strange Wings was very basic alternative possibility of the two coming together, to this point of your second installment has a serious driven, and closest canon story/lore you tried to keep. And to balance great not too long, and just enough detailed combat of vs pair up character fight encounter as if you're trying to fit script for upcoming vs match of the fighting game itself.
I'm glad I came aboard to enjoy this epic story plot with these pairing of Ragna and Tsubaki, but something tells me you'll be holding off till we all see the game release to see true ending and BB:CP.
| Rocketfist chapter 26 . 3/27/2013
and the death Ikaruga ninja leader was a perfect draw back...
| Rocketfist chapter 24 . 3/27/2013
Three Major things that's a whole new run for me:
1. The End of Trinity
2. Tsubaki new outfit. (I'd asume its the Izayoi character form based on new Blazblue CP)
3. Bang just evolved into a true hero...
A whole new ball game...keep it going!
| Rocketfist chapter 23 . 3/27/2013