This is awesome just could you please make the chapters longer xx

A good twist ending would be jana and ...
Harry

Right now I'm reviewing ur story but I never review I just wanted 2 say your amazing at writing and the story was really touched I stayed up til 2 am 2 read it

Your amazing with those typing fingers

Hello! just wanna ask if that was the ending? It was a good story BTW. :)) I kinda felt bad for Nialler though.

But im too lazy to do tht :(

Man i usually dont read fanfic with this sort of "darkness" (might not be the right word lawl) but i really loved this story! Although i feel bad for niall :c lol and again this was awesome!

This is freaking amazing. I LOVE IT :D

it was great keep wrting

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Ahhhh , stupid people who want to take 1D stories down

Im loving this its amaZAYN and i love it

I think Niall and Jana are cute together. :-)

to be honest.. i started slamming my head against my pillow and screaming wrong guy when she strted kissing zayn. i wish jana and niall would be together, he had such strong feelings for her, especially when he brought her to the beach house. and whe he saved her and ashley. and when they almost kissed.. IM GETTING EMOTIONAL OKIE

to be honest.. i started slamming my head against my pillow and screaming wrong guy when she strted kissing zayn. i wish jana and niall would be together, he had such strong feelings for her, especially when he brought her to the beach house. and whe he saved her and ashley. and when they almost kissed.. IM GETTING EMOTIONAL OKIE

You made me love Niall! Yeah! :)

This is intense, so cute!