|Reviews for Outbound|
| Sharon chapter 12 . 9/19
The story was good however it was really hard to understand who was talking
| Taz Cullen chapter 12 . 5/3
I’m in love! The best in a long time!
| ninny 1 chapter 12 . 2/26
Such. A lovely tale
So sad it’s over
Thank you for your talent
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/4/2017
Yeah, any chapter rose was mentioned in, I cried. Hard. Every chapter she was mentioned. I loved this story though. Loved the characters and how good they were
| onlybelieved chapter 12 . 7/23/2017
I LOVED this so much. The dialogue was maybe sometimes a little hard to follow but some expressions or descriptions made my heart swell (or broke it, but in the best way) thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/22/2017
Seems like he treats like a booty call. Just my opinion
| yayasimone chapter 11 . 1/27/2017
This is how it should be.
| yayasimone chapter 2 . 1/27/2017
I read this a while back, just stumbled across it again. I remember now how much I loved it and am enjoying it again just as much.
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/10/2017
You're an amazing writer. This was beautiful
| Lanna chapter 4 . 12/27/2016
| Lanna chapter 7 . 12/27/2016
Omg poor Rose... :(
| Lanna chapter 8 . 12/27/2016
Poor Bella Mak is leaving...
| Lanna chapter 12 . 12/27/2016
Oh my...this was really sweet. Your Edward is so dreamy omg. Loved. Thanks for sharing your beautiful words.
| sami69 chapter 12 . 12/8/2016
Wow! I don't know how I missed this little gem! Thank you your written words are exquisite!
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/21/2016
Incredible. Thank you for sharing.