Great first chapter!

And here it is at last. Can't wait for more. :)

I squealed so loud when I saw a new story from you! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Yeah! Am I one of the first reviews? Can't wait for the next chapters, I'm already hooked. So detailed and descriptive. I love when I can picture everything in my head and I really felt like I could see everything like I was there. I kind of like the fact that he asked her to come home with him and she didn't hesitate. She knew there was something there between them and she went for it. Often times in a story there's so much deliberating in their head it gets frustrating. I'm sure there won't always be such an easy time for these two but it started out Great. So hopefully this review makes since. It's 1230 my time and I've been up since 6am.

My two lovely girls...You have absolutely done it again!

I'm so in love with this already! So many bits and pieces and my mind is already going a million different directions with everything. The way you described Edward? Gah! That was incredible and Aunt Mary is awesome!

Then the end, the plane? I'm DYING to know what happens next! Please update soon :)

*sigh* so amazing...I'm in awe-again!

Hugs and lots of love to you both!

Erin~ (les16)

Oh...you girls kill me :) I am so excited about this story! I know it will be amazing! I loved reading this through the fandom gives back thing...

I look forward to the ride for the next couple weeks!

Thanks

Tracey

Seems like a fun ride. :)

Ahhhh This story! It takes my breath away how the two of you take us in and place us right into the moment. I don't find myself easily distracted while reading this, because IT'S SO GOOD! I love LOVE that Edward wears a WATCH! I love everything about this story and I'm glad to see it go live :)