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| cantstopreadingfanfictions chapter 29 . 1/2
I loved your story...it was really interesting with all the drama...but honestly, I feel the end was too abrupt...after all they had ben through, Scor and James' breakup was too immediate without climax. and the epilogue also seemed a bit off...like you just wanted them to be together so they are together...(please do not feel insulted...jut trying to give my opinion on the story)...but I honestly did love it till chapter 26/27...
| Aldastan chapter 29 . 12/25/2012
I cried! Absolutely beautiful. LOVED it.
| DistantDreamerX chapter 29 . 8/6/2012
This was an awesomely written story, even though I was really, REALLY tempted to skip over the James and Scorpius parts... like, MAJORLY tempted...
But, I don't totally understand... cause at the end, Scorpius said that it's always been Albus, this whole time he loved Albus, but he still told Albus that he had feelings for James and wanted to continue just being friends with Albus? I guess if he was confused and all, but... I dunno, these kinds of romances confuse me if they're not spelled out for me xD I'm a tad slow when it comes to that.
Tch, and fuck James... gah, he irritated me! But, it kept me reading in the hopes that him and Scorpius was only one-sided, but then eventually I had to settle for "oh, Scorpius came to his senses after YEARS xP". Glad to see everything got settled with Harry. Though I wonder why Harry took James and Lily off his Gringott's? Ginny, I understand, but not so much his other two kids.
Such is life, I suppose... well, I really enjoyed this story, even if it had more drama and heartbreak than most romance stories I read. Story has been Favorited, by the way, so I can come back and read the scenes between James and Scorpius for a good cry... perhaps I'm too much of an Albus/Scorpius fan haha. I'm off to read some shameless AP/SM fluff now, with no interfering brothers.
Once again, though, this was incredibly interesting and a great read.
| Frederick chapter 13 . 8/1/2012
Man Draco is really lying about his part war in the war and all of the horrible things he did. makes it really hard to like him when he's still a lying coward.
| Clove x chapter 29 . 5/15/2012
Where to start? I've been addicted to this story for the last couple of days. I don't normally read slash at all, so I'm not sure what drew me in, but whatever it was, I'm really glad it has.
I loved this. Absolutely adored. James and Scorpius together has become one of my pleasure pairings, even though this is an Albus/Severus story and everyone likes them together. Also, James a Slytherin? His cocky attitude, him himself - LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! Could he have gotten any better?
So all in all, 10/10.
| Raeigh chapter 29 . 4/5/2012
This story is a good combination of nice/sweet and bitter. Honestly though, I don't think that Albus and Scorpius should have ended up together in the end. Yes, it was romantic and all of the AS/S shippers might have cursed up a storm, but in the end they were both bad for each other. Scorpius broke Al's heart and due to his and James' (mostly the latter's) jerkiness he was tortured for a long time. And Al could have solved the situation in the beginning if he had just manned up and forgave Scorpius when they were at Pansy's place.
I think that the real power that this story could have potentially had would be in learning the value of forgiveness and letting go of hatred and anger, as well as people. It's so incredibly hard to watch somebody that you care about leave you for somebody else, and it's so incredibly easy to hate them for it. What's hard is letting go of those negative feelings. In real life (well, I'm sure there are some crazy romances but at least in all of my experiences) you can't wait for years while your ex-love has a relationship with your brother. Unless you just want to hate the two of them- and yourself- for the rest of your life (or just the term of their relationship) you've got to let go.
I felt like Albus should have found somebody else that he truly loved. I wanted to see him go on dates- awkward at first- but find somebody who really valued him for him, and would love him. The only way you can escape the pain of an old lover is to find a new one. I guess I'm just left feeling wanting at the end of this story. They have so much history and baggage that was never acknowledged, and it seems like they just fell together in a fairy tale ending. I'm sure that they resolved things behind the scenes but I guess I just had so much sympathetic anger for James and Scorpius that lingered all the way through Al and Scorp's reunion. Definitely a good story though overall.
| DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 29 . 3/12/2012
What an amazing ending. I am so happy that they got back together. I mean I like Scorpius/James but I love Scorpius/Albus more. This was just, amazing.
| DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 22 . 3/12/2012
Poor Albus. I can see why he's so angry.
| DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 17 . 3/12/2012
Boy we just can't leave the past in the past. James really needs to get over his parents divorce and stop being a total jerk.
| DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 11 . 3/12/2012
Well, I have to say that Ginny is a greedy-Biatch.
| xXxStarStrifexXx chapter 29 . 1/29/2012
Really great :) I'd like to see the sequel too :)
| Nessie-san chapter 7 . 1/15/2012
VERY unrealistic in a custody case. In most cases, the children would be consulted with a lawyer representing their interests present, and while their opinion would be taken into account (for instance, that James didn't want to see his father and that Albus wanted to see more of Harry), the final decision would most likely be that James would have at least every other weekend with his father, and that Lily and Albus would probably have every weekend, or every other week, with their father, since Albus definitely wanted to see him more and Lily probably wanted both her mother and her father. Also, even if James hadn't wanted to see his father, the fact that there was no child abuse or spousal abuse from Harry would mean that James would be forced to see Harry just as often as the others. The most realistic case would probably be Ginny and Harry getting shared custody, with some kind of equal arrangement that would leave neither of them happy, but both of them seeing their children.
| LanaTheIguana chapter 25 . 11/21/2011
Just letting you know, I'm gonna stop reading this story!
Honestly, it's well written and everything, I just can't handle this much heartbreak for Albus.
I'm definitely rooting for Alby, but it just keeps breaking my heart whenever James and Scor are together.
Don't get me wrong, at first when James and Scor were together I thought it was pretty hot, but now I'm severely pissed off at James. I litterally want home dead. I want to crawl into this story, hunt James down and beat him up with a metal baseball bat until he's almost dead, then maybe skin him alive just for the fun of it then piss on his dead body then put it in a box and send it to Scor .
PHEW wow, sorry I really really REALLY had to get that out haha :(
| LanaTheIguana chapter 22 . 11/20/2011
"With that he swept away with a flourish that would have been deemed commendable even by his second namesake."
I FRIKKEN LOVE THIS LINE!
| LanaTheIguana chapter 7 . 11/19/2011
Hey, so I kinda did the math and Albus should be 15 in the year 2021...
ANYWAYS this story is really really really really good, I can't wait to read more :3