|Reviews for That Which Is Lost|
| starfingers chapter 16 . 1/22
This series of one-shots need more review! It does have grammar slip-ups and could use some better composition (I personally had to reread some parts before understanding the story or point of view) but otherwise, I think you have a gift in capturing storytelling-worth moments. Perhaps you could put character's thoughts in italic for easier read? :)
All in all, keep writing. I'll be waiting!
| Kc495 chapter 6 . 7/2/2014
I love these so much , they're all so cute
| Kc495 chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
This was beautiful! I came across this accidentally and holly cow its wonderful. It's so beautifully written I want to cry, I wish I was as good as you.
| Athenafrodite chapter 9 . 10/22/2011
aaw so sweet. kind of confused due to the lack of space between dialogues, but that's just and upload mistake. anyway hope you update soon!
| Gisel0202 chapter 4 . 8/5/2011
Great work! This is really good :D Update Soon!
| FullMetal chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
| Killerwolf chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Oh when the next one