Reviews for HD 'Clinical Trials of Case VLA101' 2011DracoTops
Amu4ever chapter 11 . 11/3
Malfoy is trying at least :)
Amu4ever chapter 10 . 11/3
Very adorable this chapter. Imagining Harry all flustered is very cute :)
Amu4ever chapter 9 . 11/3
Well, that was one heck of a cinema visit :D
Amu4ever chapter 8 . 11/3
Hmmm...wonder if Daco will ever be the fluffy, loving partner Harry sometimes need. A true hug...a heartfelt hug would be a great improvement...
Amu4ever chapter 7 . 11/3
So, there he has it. The "touch him like he wants to" part Harry has been missing :)
Amu4ever chapter 6 . 11/3
Awww...he just wants to be wanted. How cute :)
Amu4ever chapter 5 . 11/3
Hehehe...this was hillarious! Malfoy is very effectively driving Harry mad...and jealous :D
Amu4ever chapter 2 . 11/3
Your mind works in confusing and mysterious ways :D
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 11/3
You remind me of Luna Loveood. You simply possess that kind of craziness.
Sybil Vane chapter 11 . 4/17/2015
I'm enjoying this story a lot. It's a refreshing take on the Veela trope. However, the way you write dialog throws me off sometimes. It's very real to life - too real to life, in fact, especially in the places where the person's inflection completely changes the meaning of what they say. Text simply cannot capture those differences enough to adequately convey what the ear can hear easily. The sentence inversion is sometimes a bit extreme, too. In future stories, it might be worth sacrificing some of your real-to-life dialog for the sake of clarity? It's something to play with, at least, because I personally would love to be able to follow your stories without having to reread every piece of dialog four or five times.
sinsarmady chapter 27 . 2/28/2015
I don’t know why, but I just have this urge to write a review for this fiction. I even made an account just to write this. I'm out of my mind, surely.
This is the first gay fan fiction I've ever read. I feel like I lost my innocence, and you know what? It feels good. I have read so many HP fictions but none of them were as satisfying as this. I have never thought that I would like this but you're … and your writing is just … impeccable! From the first paragraph I knew I became addicted. I read it during class in collage, in the bathroom, while I was "studying", during family time (which is impossible because everyone wants to know what I'm reading, and I still haven’t figured out how to tell my innocent, Muslim family that I'm reading gay porn … *sigh* I'm definitely going to hell…), after I wake up in the morning and before I go to sleep and until I can't keep my eyes open. But I waited for three weeks before I read the final chapter because I'm a coward and I'm afraid of letting go.
I don’t really know how to express my feelings and thoughts with words … so, I'm sorry for this because it doesn't really reflect what's on my mind.
The story is, without a doubt, one of my favourites, and I will cherish it and reread it until the end of time.
I'm so glad I found you and this fiction because this-you-this is life changing.
I think Keaton Henson describes it best when he said: "You are … oh you are."
سلام من الإمارات العربية المتحدة، يا عزيزتي !
Phoenica chapter 27 . 8/27/2014
This piece is spectacular, right from the first sentence to the last. The voice and characterization was clear immediately, and the fond use of surnames and rude nicknames really drew in a sense of familiarity and love despite their histories. Adding in the topic of neglect and abuse (and calling Dumbledore out on it, along with others) added a dimension I loved seeing. Please keep writing - your work is astounding, with wonderful dialogue and grit. Your research also paid off magnificently, if I may say so myself, as I recognized many of the quotes of other languages. Keep up the unrivalled work!
Pilpols chapter 15 . 6/3/2014
OMG this is amazing!
saraamiri1999 chapter 27 . 6/3/2014
I liked it very very much
But...why have you kept theme calling their selfs by their familly name xD
And in the end they were both of them Malfoys so... XD
Well you know what i mean
AlexiCyn chapter 27 . 10/28/2013
This was...

SQUEEEEE! LOL. Frantic! and Fabulous! And Manic! And Gawds! I laughed so hard at times! Wonderful doesn't even cover it, but let us go with that for now... WONDERFUL!

OH... are they EVER going to call one another Harry and Draco? LOL Just too cute... I think when you have your boner buried in someone's arse, it is OK to be on a first name basis ;)

Wonderful!
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