Reviews for HD 'Clinical Trials of Case VLA101' 2011DracoTops
Sybil Vane chapter 11 . 4/17
I'm enjoying this story a lot. It's a refreshing take on the Veela trope. However, the way you write dialog throws me off sometimes. It's very real to life - too real to life, in fact, especially in the places where the person's inflection completely changes the meaning of what they say. Text simply cannot capture those differences enough to adequately convey what the ear can hear easily. The sentence inversion is sometimes a bit extreme, too. In future stories, it might be worth sacrificing some of your real-to-life dialog for the sake of clarity? It's something to play with, at least, because I personally would love to be able to follow your stories without having to reread every piece of dialog four or five times.
sinsarmady chapter 27 . 2/28
I don’t know why, but I just have this urge to write a review for this fiction. I even made an account just to write this. I'm out of my mind, surely.
This is the first gay fan fiction I've ever read. I feel like I lost my innocence, and you know what? It feels good. I have read so many HP fictions but none of them were as satisfying as this. I have never thought that I would like this but you're … and your writing is just … impeccable! From the first paragraph I knew I became addicted. I read it during class in collage, in the bathroom, while I was "studying", during family time (which is impossible because everyone wants to know what I'm reading, and I still haven’t figured out how to tell my innocent, Muslim family that I'm reading gay porn … *sigh* I'm definitely going to hell…), after I wake up in the morning and before I go to sleep and until I can't keep my eyes open. But I waited for three weeks before I read the final chapter because I'm a coward and I'm afraid of letting go.
I don’t really know how to express my feelings and thoughts with words … so, I'm sorry for this because it doesn't really reflect what's on my mind.
The story is, without a doubt, one of my favourites, and I will cherish it and reread it until the end of time.
I'm so glad I found you and this fiction because this-you-this is life changing.
I think Keaton Henson describes it best when he said: "You are … oh you are."
سلام من الإمارات العربية المتحدة، يا عزيزتي !
Phoenica chapter 27 . 8/27/2014
This piece is spectacular, right from the first sentence to the last. The voice and characterization was clear immediately, and the fond use of surnames and rude nicknames really drew in a sense of familiarity and love despite their histories. Adding in the topic of neglect and abuse (and calling Dumbledore out on it, along with others) added a dimension I loved seeing. Please keep writing - your work is astounding, with wonderful dialogue and grit. Your research also paid off magnificently, if I may say so myself, as I recognized many of the quotes of other languages. Keep up the unrivalled work!
Pilpols chapter 15 . 6/3/2014
OMG this is amazing!
saraamiri1999 chapter 27 . 6/3/2014
I liked it very very much
But...why have you kept theme calling their selfs by their familly name xD
And in the end they were both of them Malfoys so... XD
Well you know what i mean
AlexiCyn chapter 27 . 10/28/2013
This was...

SQUEEEEE! LOL. Frantic! and Fabulous! And Manic! And Gawds! I laughed so hard at times! Wonderful doesn't even cover it, but let us go with that for now... WONDERFUL!

OH... are they EVER going to call one another Harry and Draco? LOL Just too cute... I think when you have your boner buried in someone's arse, it is OK to be on a first name basis ;)

Drarry4eva chapter 27 . 10/2/2013
Amazing story, really it was. I could have done without the voyerism but it was all good.
Drarry4eva chapter 22 . 10/2/2013
I can't understand why McGonnagall and Madam Pomfrey have to watch something so private. They are of age are they not? I'm just confused as to why they don't have a choice, they are adults. They can do what they please. I do like this though I just don't like that they are still being treated like children.
Drarry4eva chapter 7 . 10/1/2013
God, someone really needs to slap Harry. He is acting like such a child, of all people I thought he would grow up. School is over, shouldn't he just except it and move on? I know it's not like I can't hear Harry's b*tching but I feel like I can, I just want to strangle him. What a child. I am still going to read this though cause I do like it. I just hope I will still be sane by the time I've finished. And I'm not saying your a bad writer, I just hate how you portrayed Harry. He's being annoying.
rAiNwAtEr chapter 27 . 9/25/2013
Absolutely adorable. At times a bit over drawn in the Drabble area but other wise very enjoyable. Thanks ever so much for sharing!
wolfie chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
OH MY GOOD. its really nice story. but i am just gaping like fish. wow. it is interesting story. coooooool.
Lynnxrider chapter 27 . 12/23/2012
I must say, you had almost lost me for a while. What with the long winded explanations of everything and the pointless dithering of some characters. And yet...I'm immensely gland I stuck with it. I kept trying to put it down but the curiosity always brought me back eventually. I finally read it to the last...and that last line...really that last line was what got me. Never in the whole story was there a word of love, other than to discuss what could be. And just like that, that last line was like magic, making a somewhat lacking relationship completely fulfilled. Thank you for a wonderful story, tigersilver, and be forever brilliant.
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 27 . 11/6/2012
Good story. It was different, but I enjoyed it a lot.
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 22 . 11/5/2012
While i like this story, Harry's incapability to speak is getting on my nerves.
bubblesfreak chapter 27 . 9/26/2012
I adored the last 3 chapters. My favorite id when harry made draco do the bond early. It was quite endearing how close they fianally were.
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