|Reviews for Eye of the Storm|
| TheOrangeStar802 chapter 9 . 1/6
I. LOVE. IT. I love this fic, I tell you. A little side note though, and I don't really mean to sound harsh but how you started this fic was completely boring. If it weren't for the fact that this fic has good reviews, I would've abandoned it in chapter 1. I'm just saying that maybe some people have overlooked the awesomeness of this story just because you weren't able to entice them in the earlier chapters. Hopefully, you have your reasons coz I still think the part of Dragon was useless. The moment Naruto and his brothers entered the picture was finally when things got good yo. I loved the comedy and love in there. So yeah, this is not a flame but I just feel saddened over the idea that some might have not seen the fic for what it is in the latter chapters. It's really freaking good, I tell you. So...
UPDATE PLEASE! Zabuza and Naruto's history needs justice... and so does that seal on his forehead.
| JRecon chapter 9 . 11/29/2013
this is a good story good work
| tavin93 chapter 9 . 10/23/2013
This was actually pretty good I'm sad to see it end.
| Such-a-sadsound chapter 9 . 8/30/2013
Let me just roll around on you because this story is perfect. I love the fact that you change the point of views of the same scene, because that never really happens in fics, ever. It's nice, and refreshing, and that touch of Naruto having PTSD is down right wonderful. The fact that he has problems makes him believable, because he grew up in an environment where he knew that people loved and cared for him despite the fact that he holds the Kyuubi. Also, Kakashi putting that seal on Naruto to reduce his chakra in half is genius. Usually in stories with Naruto being demoted to a genin he's so strong he over shadows the other characters, and he tends to do all the work for the team, while I don't mind them it just gets repetitive. I don't even know how to touch on the fact that your characterization is flawless, and so is the dynamics between characters. I mean really every character is absolutely lovely. I can't wait to read more of this story. .
p.s. zabuza and naruto being little shits is really cute even with the tension.
| StoneLily chapter 8 . 8/28/2013
don't really like Sakura but I never like her in any fanfic
| Jay chapter 7 . 8/22/2013
And it was all going so well until you decided to put him on a genin team and go back to canon. I mean whats the point of the story of him being an anbu trained to be a weapon, if your just going to make him genin. Everything you've written in regards to war danzo played against sarutobi for naruto is negated. Naruto is just a normal kid now, and thats sooo boring. Cant read anymore cos i know you'l just follow canon like every other author.
| Booker10 chapter 9 . 8/13/2013
| LunaEchoWillow chapter 9 . 7/30/2013
Well thought out and rather interesting.
| WhiteFang15 chapter 5 . 7/14/2013
'Somewhere deep in one of the Genin training fields, a man woke up with a note attached to his chest...his bare chest.
"Hmm? What's this? 'True youth needs no adornments'?" He looked down at his naked body and blinked. "Why, what a fantastic revelation my fellow youthful friend left me this year! In thanks, I shall run one hundred—NO! ONE THOUSAND!—laps around Konoha! And if I cannot do that, I will climb a mountain with my pinky! And if I cannot do that, I will—wait...do my youthful eyes see more written on the back...? 'And remember to share the glory of your youth with as many people as possible.' Hmmm..." Gai thought for a moment. It was a rather splendid idea. "Alright, then, my anonymous, youthful friend! After my one thousand laps around our beautiful village, I shall shout my youthful declarations to the world from the very top of the Hokage Tower!"
And then, he proceeded to do just that.
The village would never be the same.'
I lol'd so damn hard... LOVED IT!
| Matt chapter 5 . 7/8/2013
First things first. I like your story and the idea behind it.
But the way it evolves pisses me off. I mean the hokage the goddamn god of shinobi should by all means be a master politican.
The way i see it there are four problems with his agreement with danzo.
Danzo has no basis to stake claim to Naruto from the beginning. Add to that the fact that he is the know commander of the "shut down" root program. Root was known to everybody for its inhuman training methods so NOBODY would EVER entrust a child to him.
Therefor there is no need for any agreement.
The higher ups in konoha know about Narutos parents so with one word and jut one word alone sarutobi can protect Naruto: CLANMATTERS. With this one word every claim, sheme, plan or what else can be denied.
All the agreement said was anbu training. So no reason to actually put him in anbu.
Fourth and last
The second he is even remotely at genin level sarutobi can give him his hiate. With this he is considert an adult and the agreement becomes void. He can make his own choices.
| Ibskib chapter 8 . 6/11/2013
After spending last chapter detailing how weak Sakura is, her managing to successfully threaten the boys doesn't really work. That aside it's nice to see her showing of her strengths, like her chakra control
| Ibskib chapter 5 . 6/10/2013
could you tell me what translation of Man'yoshu the excerpt you used is from?
| TEBOJEM chapter 3 . 6/1/2013
you really need to learn how to hook your audience
| fierynightangel chapter 9 . 5/3/2013
awesome! very much looking forward to more! hope all is well!
| paracuties chapter 9 . 4/8/2013
DUDE, this story is awesome! I love ANBU Naruto. It is just SOOO totally awesome. And what's even more awesome is that Naruto and Zabuza already met and everything, which just makes it so much more funny, what with the exchanges between the two of them. I hope they don't die in the end then, because they're both such good people...the one part I cried in Naruto was when Zabuza died. That part was just PLAIN SAD. Literally cried, and I didn't even cry during that epic fight between Naruto and Sasuke when Sasuke was leaving the village...anyway, this story is really cool-I hope you update soon, and keep writing!