Reviews for The Outsider's Story
Darkwarrior1010 chapter 23 . 2/23/2014
I ended up staying past midnight to read this because of how much I loved it... I'm not sure whether to hate you for writing this or to love you. But whatever it doesn't matter. I'm just glad I finished the thing in a sitting. I really liked how you did the emotions and description, I felt as if my heart wasn't in my body but in this story, which is the sign of a real book, not some bad-written story.

I saw multiple errors of misplaced quotation marks (Very small ones as in it was right next to the word before it or no space inbetween the words) and sometimes when you were writing responses you said the wrong name... It was a hurdle that drew me out of the story as I tried to figure out what I just read.

But other than that it was an amazing story that I do not regret reading, I don't even ship the two but I couldn't help but love the story!

Congrats on a well done fic!
Veline Shee chapter 23 . 2/22/2014
Woaah it finish? I kinda feel sad but but since you write it so nicely i forgive you c:
Really awesome beautiful story i can feel my emotions running as i read it. I hope you get another ideas one day to make another lukaito story! Write it up soon if you got already :D
Veline Shee chapter 22 . 1/26/2014
Ahhh nooooo i cried ;A;
The part where kuro said i still love u and always will teared my heart, i also don't want their relationship to end, authooorr who should i cheer? I really love lukaito but i also want to see(read) kuro's part again (now now i feel like being luka :"D)

Oh well if luka choose kaito, then kuro is for me xD

Omg whats with neru! I thought she will let it go after the kiss she ask in previous chapter! That damnn girl why she keep bugging them D:

Thank you for not abandoning this story author! I will be looking forward to the next updates even it will last for hundreds chapter, because i just like your story so much that i can't forget the story from the begining, and u know i almost think im going to print out all chapters you've write and kept it as my free time story book of lukaito, and i might ask my friend who's a lukaito shippers to read it too :"D

Write up soon! :3
Yukixhif chapter 8 . 11/9/2013
Kuro's from JBF! 3 mwahahaha
AllBoutCookies chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Update plz
dark lil'angel2be chapter 21 . 9/1/2013
omg! omg! omg! Please update soon! I LOVE THIS STORY! XD PLease update soon!
Veline Shee chapter 21 . 8/29/2013
Awww you just make my heart doki doki again kyaaahhh #fangirling
Okk gonna be waiting for the next chappie! Write up soon! Thankies :3
Czarii123476 chapter 21 . 8/28/2013
I can predict :3 The MV must be JBF XD hihihihihihi
karenanzora 90 chapter 21 . 8/22/2013
Whattttttttttttttttttttttttttttt?, can not be because Kuro?, woo every day I fall more in your fic, just when things are going well, you have to spend some shit, but I love that story makes you more attractive felcito, continues.
Fuyu L.S chapter 20 . 8/4/2013
first, sora want to say sorry cuz' this story was saved at my phone for the long long time ago, but sora just finished reading it yesterday... TTATT
thats why... sora really really really sora and yet, sora love this so much... XD
thanks to senpai, now sora ship for LuKaito more... XD
so, fast update please... XD
Twinny chapter 20 . 6/23/2013
Kyaaaah! Luka admitted her feelings- again!
The moe! The moe! •D•

Kegi Springfield chapter 20 . 6/21/2013
congratulaton for the seal of biliteracy
good chapter as always...
Veline Shee chapter 20 . 6/21/2013
Aaaaaaa soo cutee!
I love this chappie very much, when both of them wanted to get each other jealous, and I just realize got a very small bl scene (kuro and kaito) LOL and I really enjoyed it
Thank youu! Update soon! :3
I'll be your loyal reader
Hello chapter 19 . 6/12/2013
Uggh i hate kaito attitude in here *sigh* it make me want to punch him LOL, but in the latest chap, i like it when his effort to gain luka attention x"D
and u know author san, your fic is the first fic i ever read which make me cry so badly *psssttt it is embarrased actually* x"D
the climax conflict is very dramatic and uggh mixed all my emotion u.u, especially in the beginning story u.u how dare you kaito shion... Hurt luka so badly, poor luka ugggh i want to punch u and slap u right now u.u *ehemmm uhuk* ehe sorry :D
and for the closing, update ASAP :D i'll wait it *i cant wait it, i cant wait it x")* ehemm okay sayonara
PurpleSweets13 chapter 2 . 5/19/2013
All the first years in my school are so cocky too. I completely agree with Luka, they need to be put in their place :P
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