Reviews for Dance
kk chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
great story. I love Sin and Alans relationship and the insecurity that lies between them, and I think you capture that very well here. :)

just a random thought, but i really did like it!
vapanalley chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Sin knew there were other dances in life. And Alan danced them too well.

She wondered when things changed. She may have begun by dancing with Nick but Alan was finishing it.

Basically, every single line I was awed and stunned and surprised and pleased and happy and sad and excited and anticipatory, right along with Sin. My heartstrings were tugged along on their own accord. Great piece. ;) I'm stunned by each of these lines. They're some of my favorite, but that last line is a true killer as well. You wrote Sin so well, and I love how her feelings morph, and her doubt and certainties in life are so well represented. Great job! Thanks for sharing, TDL and series seriously need more love!