|Reviews for Bésame Mucho|
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/10
Oh my goodness. Your story is so beyond amazing I'm at a loss for words. I'm not even kidding. And I'm never at a loss for words. You're so very detailed and descriptive without being boring about it, it makes me laugh, makes me angry and sad... You definitely know how to paint a picture with words. When I'd read Auf Wiedersehen I exploded with emotions. I was so teary eyed and giggly someone might think I'd lost it. I was so incredibly excited to read Bésame Mucho. I'm so glad I wasn't disappointed. Though I'm quite sad to see you haven't updated. I keep rereading it over and over like somehow it'll just all of sudden update itself and I can continue reading. It's truly amazing and I really can't wait until you update again.
(P.S. So far from what I've read, Lily of the Lamplight is no let down either.)
| ofmustachesandtomatoes chapter 6 . 3/9
oh dear god please update ;w;
| TwinsinsThlee chapter 6 . 3/4
So good. I've read this fic over and over and I can't get enough of it. The way you write Lovino and Antonio is sooo perfect. The characterizations are down pat. I really love all the fics you've been doing that all tie in with each other (tbh I think I love it too much) and I'm addicted. Such a great story you've been telling (with all of your fics, honestly) and I can't wait until you continue it!
| hey chapter 6 . 2/21
You haven't updated this fic for SO LONG;;
I love your series SO MUCH!Pliease continue
| CraftyWarriorHeart chapter 6 . 2/18
I really love this story and cannot wait for the next chapter!
Plz continue I'm begging you. And I don't beg to just anyone so when I say your work is good and beg you to continue I mean it:)
| YGOfangirl4ever chapter 6 . 2/16
I swear this is one of the best fanfiction I EVER read! Better even than a lot of officially released literature.
The grammar and spelling are just... Ugh I wanna hug you for writing it so well!
Not to mention that your ability to convery emotions through every single world is just amazing! I swear, the plot is wonderful, and I just... just... I seriously randomly start tearing up because of this story! Like that time Antonio remembered his past with Gil and Francis, and when I read it, /I/ started feeling nostalgic, and I even cried, despite it being a rather happy moment, and even the next day, while thinking back on the story, I could feel my badomen hurt from all the emotion!
Not to mention that it's the type of story that I just want to keep on reading and reading and reading because it's just that amazing, yet I just can't read it all at once, I to take breaks because otherwise all the feeling and thoughts and emotions and just pure awesomeness /overwhelm/ me!
Ugh I can barely find words to express how much I love this story! And you for writing it!
Keep awesome. Seriously. You should totally become a writer because it would be a shame to keep the whole world from knowing your amazingness!
| Alix the Alien Cyborg chapter 1 . 2/15
oh my god that's so /Romano/ I love it!
| FieryEnblem chapter 6 . 2/13
sorry but since i can't log in...
I'm glad you finally updated! well, its been a while since i last visited ff, so an update is much appreciated.
I miss this fic.
and yes, I say, you are a brilliant writer, for capturing emotions and writing vivid descriptions of the scenery - to the point that i wish my writing style is like yours.
To the fic - I got the feeling of world war, 2, the impending danger, and creating two contrasting scene of war and peace. I love how you interpret the character's personality, giving them more depth, a human soul, while still being themselves - the way Himaruya portrayed them.
Kudos and hope to read more from you.
| Lexi chapter 1 . 2/9
Please, please don't give up on this story, it's amazing. Lovino and Antonio's characters were spot on and I can't wait to see what will come in the next few chapters. This fanfiction, like all you other works, is beautiful.
| Crista chapter 6 . 2/5
| Kayshorty chapter 6 . 2/5
I love this story and all the others too but it makes me sad that I already know what's going to happen to Antonio . And what makes it even worse is how Lovino keeps talking about Antonio's strong arms . :'(
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/3
I've been keeping up with your stories for years now, so I figured it's about time I said something about how much I admire your writing.
I started reading these because, at the time, I had an unhealthy obsession with Hetalia. Even after I wore that out, though, I found myself coming back and checking for updates because your fics are incredibly well written and they keep me wanting to find out what happens next.
I greatly appreciate your contribution to the world of Hetalia and to the world of writers, both. It's not hard to see how diligently you've researched the topics and how much time you've spent planning the stories out. It's such an inspiration to me, how much effort you put into your work! Your fanfictions are better than many novels! You are also very skilled at analyzing the characters' personalities and incorporating them in your writing.
Thank you so very much for sharing your brilliant stories!
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/1
I found your Veraverse yesterday and spent all day reading "Auf Wiedersehen, Sweetheart" then I was up until 3am reading "Bésame Mucho" before I thought I should get some sleep (once I started reading I couldn't stop). All I can say is wow. Your writing is amazing. These stories are the best thing I've ever read on , and are better than a fair few published books.
Your characterisation is spot on, I especially love how you write Lovino. And I love that all the stories in this AU are interconnected like the characters' lives actually are on the show. It makes it feel more real knowing all the other characters are still doing stuff when they're not the focus of a particular fic.
So many parts of this fic just made me squeal with happiness, day made. This made me ship Antonio/Lovino even more. It's killing me because I read "Auf Wiedersehen, Sweetheart" so I know what's going to happen to Antonio and I can't stop it from happening, ugggh I care too much about these characters.
Anyway, thanks for writing so brilliantly and making me so happy. I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter.
| Kawaii Rin-chan chapter 6 . 1/30
Oh boy. . .it took me a good five minutes to remember my password for my lovely account - but it was totally worth it to review this lovely chapter as a signed name. First of all - I remember reading months ago how you clarified that you do not dump stories - and you finish them. Well, that was great and dandy but then after this lovely story was not updated over...was it a year? I kind-of gave up just a tad bit as your profile was also doing some funky stuff.
However, I am so-ever so very happy you are the type that does finish his stories. Normally, I get over it and get on with my life - but like a previous reviewer wrote before - just this one chapter completely and utterly reminded me how much I adore this ficlet and why it is in my top three favorite ficlets regarding Heta-Spamano. My top three...do you know how much ficlets I read of Spamano? And that's another thing - I do not read Heta as often but...Honestly, you're the type of author and this is the type of story that makes me re-realize (is that even a word) how much I adore Spamano and Hetalia in general. 3
So, thanks! For this awesome chapter. Though now. . .;-; I kinda know whats going to happen due to your other ficlets and...oh dear, I do not want to thinking about a future bawling session due to feelz. Also, the mention about the Nordics was. . . well - I suppose this whole chapter was just a jumble box of feelings. I be waiting patiently for your next chapter As even if its a year from now, as long as you're willing to complete it - I be more than happy to wait. :3
Have a great day, you totally contributed to mine!
| IggyLikesToExplode chapter 6 . 1/27
This chapter was so wonderful! Please update soon! :D