Reviews for Surrender |
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![]() ![]() hehehe, Dio dammit James. |
![]() ![]() ...YES, YES, YES, YES, YES, YES, YES YEEESSSSSSSS! |
![]() ![]() is this the real life? is this just fantasy? Caught in a landslide. no escape from reality. |
![]() ![]() Absolutely love this, like the ooc element |
![]() ![]() *Le Gasp* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everyone's really...OOC in this fic. I'm not sure how I feel about this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that was definitely an interesting piece. Most of the characters definitely seemed ooc but it kinda worked for the story. Unfortunately I'm not sure how I feel about Tom bringing back the dead. It wasn't actually explained how he knew to how to do it either. Though there was something endearing about how devoted Tom was to Harry. I would have liked to see more character development with them, as well as the development of the relationship. It just seemed to be a sudden thing, but that could be due to the quick pace of the story. Another unfortunate thing is that there was a lot of unresolved things, mostly about the Dark Lords minions and such. It wasn't a big focus though so it was mostly just background. |
![]() ![]() Hv |
![]() ![]() ![]() And the power-loving jackass makes his appearance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ew |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is chaotic and I live for it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting so far. The map actually would have stated Tom Riddle was with Harry Potter. Always has the person's name. Ex: in book, the map said Peter Pettigrew, not wormtail |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wrong, the stone can't bring people back from the dead, only summon their souls... you should have used the ritual that Tom used to bring himself back that would have been more better |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story so much |