|Reviews for Roots|
| Myktison chapter 1 . 3/12
I love the brotherly love! Especially when Hal was trying to get Ben to turn around, that was my favorite part. If you do continue I would like like the swearing held back just a bit if you don't mind. Personally, I feel that foul language and the like are a crutch to writing. Just my opinion.
| Luzith chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
thanks! Loved it :)
| lederra chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Actually this was very good. I would like to read more.
| Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Good story. I liked the brothery bits. Hal is sweet when he cares for Ben. :D
| dawnlee chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I really enjoyed reading this story. Thanks for sharing it :)
| Spaceseeker chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
You write Falling Skies really well. More h/c! love Ben he is an amazing character. Keep writing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
This was great! I thought the language sounded very real :)
| Yuki082 chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
this is really good
thanks for writing!
oh and the swearing is fine no worries
| Sirnonenath chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Very nice exploration of the topic. Prejudice always seems to follow fear and uncertainty. I love how you portrayed the relationship of Ben and Hal. The Masons are my favorite part of the show; I love when they interact.
| stargazing.from.earth chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
I did really like this! :) You are very good at writing...Maybe toning down the swearing would be good though. I just feel like they wouldn't swear that much anyway. But, it doesn't matter! This was really great and I would love if you continued this...or wrote one about Ben :)
| xMissyMaex chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Ok you seriously have to continue this. I love it to much now XD and don't tone down the swearing! It somehow makes it more real, and I don't I just like it I guess haha. Seriously you're a great writer PLEASE update soon!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I LOVED THIS! It would be awsome if you could wright some more stories about Ben! I think he is so hot!, but thats off topic. "Cheeky Grin" Anyway, if you could wright another story about Ben, Angels will sing when you walk. I think that there should be more stories about him, maybe some were he has a love intrest ;) You are an amazing writer, so keep it up!
Girl who loves your story.
| ChibiOfCuteness chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Hi-Hi I tried to read this story it was great from what I read but the swearing was a little much. I'm a big fan of Ben and wish I could read more if you do decide to edit it and tone the swearing down plz pm me so I can read it. thx Bye-bye COC
| FlamingPanda9 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Don't you DARE tune down the cussing. It works. And I am very excited about the upcoming chapters. Everything was portrayed so... perfectly. Thank you for giving me something wonderful to read.
| lildancer98 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
wow, u r a REALLY good writer, an dI dont think that u should tone down the cussing, it gives it a sense of freshness, i guess,... hope u update soon :D...