|Reviews for Lighting the Fuse|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12
Fantastic Story. I would to see a sequel. Great job!
| iDream13 chapter 1 . 2/11
perhaps make Parker's words and sentences a bit more slurred and slang-y as the drug really starts getting to her. otherwise, this is so cute it makes my insides tremble slightly! love the family dynamic and Nate calling Parker "baby girl," so cute!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/16
I know I have asked this before..But everytime I re-read this wonderful story of yours, I just can't help but ask. Any chance you've written a part 2 to it..Them tracking down and finding out who did this and if it's part of somthing bigger or just after Parker or...Please write a part 2...
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
PLease OH PLease! Say you have written a sequeal to this GREAT story...Please..
| Amelia chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
This was such a truly GREAT story..I really hope that you write a part two for it..Them finding out who or if it's a ring of who's and what they do to him ot them...I can so see Elliot going in and showing what happens when his 'faimly' is messed.. You did such a wonderful , truly wonderful creation of this story...
| Amelia chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Oh Please..PLEASE! Tell me you did a sequeal to this story..It was just so good, and can imagine all kinds of ways they would make sure who ever did this payed for thier crime of it...And if it was some kind of ring or some rich and powerful sleezy..OHH are they going to pay..snicker...Thank you so much for writting this, it was perfect.. And I really do hope you have a another part to it?
| KaySub chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Great story! Really hope you decide to write a sequel.
| WickedKoko chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
I thought this was great, cant wait for a sequel
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
| Gaialy chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
This so needs a sequel:)
| Clockwork Mockingbird chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
Poor Parker! I love how Eliot knew almost immediately that something was wrong though. He's so sweet when he's not all growly :3
| redrose7856 chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
YES! This is brilliant! Will there be a sequel, detailing exactly what the family does to those who mess with one of their own? Hope so! Great work on this!
| Yammy1983 chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
| whovian42 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Perfect last two sentences.
| Jada Ryl chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Eeee! :-) I love this story! They really are so much like a family. And Parker's got the best big brothers... *dreamy sigh* Yeah, I'm a bit jealous. Not that I mind her having to big brothers, but I would love it if she'd share them with me... Sequel, please? I wanna see what happens when the team finds out who roofied Parker! Somehow, I don't think he'll do it to anyone again for a very. Long. Time... :-D