Reviews for The New God of War
Silber D. Wolf chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Awesome chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
This story is not complete. Please don't mark abandoned stories complete.
Bladre MKT chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
now a bad piece but it goes TO MUCH au to fast, this is more like an original fic with a hotwarts crossover
george17 chapter 2 . 3/20/2012
Interesting idea until it got stuffed with too many oc's too early.
ThwartAbyss54 chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
Eyes Twitch Im pretty sure i saw a Polygonal Love reference in there. Write more I want to see what fun could be had. Why would you give away such a masterpiece? Unless its so you have more time to write books 5-infinity :P
Flos-Mortis chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
plz write more
GodricGryff chapter 2 . 10/7/2011
I actually find myself a little disturbed by this. 11 year olds and your talking about the one girl have C-cup breasts?

Thats pretty disturbing, especially since most girls don't even have them, or even have the interest of such things until their teens.

I definitively think the sexuality should be toned done a bit until they are older, otherwise its just creepy.
mattcun chapter 2 . 9/30/2011
plz write more
The Eternal Idea chapter 2 . 8/29/2011
So many possible crossovers.

Any anime/Manga/game etc. that has powerful fighters could be used.


Fate/Stay Night-Berserker(Hercules)


Soul Caliber-Any

Dynasty Warriors-Lu Bu

Just to name a few.
mwinter1 chapter 2 . 8/5/2011
huh. nice start. hope some one picks it up.
Kharneth666 chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
like the concept of the story. would be interesting to see him inschool
jabarber69 chapter 2 . 8/2/2011
man why dont you finish it yourself, you have a great writing style and of course the story is really interesting...
WTF2002 chapter 2 . 8/2/2011
decent start...but in my opinion there are 2 many oc's in this story and this is only the first chapter...
Call0013 chapter 2 . 8/1/2011
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