Reviews for A Balrog in the Closet
pinksugarrush chapter 1 . 1/18
OH! This story had me in tears. It just broke my heart how Legolas was pleading with his ada to not leave him like his nana. Just made my eyes water.

It was just adorable how Legolas tried to keep his father with him, too. LIke taking his previous time picking his book and drinking the tea.

The end was very sweet, too. Now it was Legolas that was coming home and it was Thranduil's turn to wait anxiously for his son's return.

Beautiful piece.

Keep up the amazing work!
Badass Archer Daughter chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Aww, this was nice! 3 So sweet! Totally adorable! Make a little sequel perhaps?
Ashleyrocker112299 chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
That was the cutest little Legolas story I've ever read.
hoigui chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
Cute Story! So sweet.
Zardi chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
How very sweet and believable. I loved seeing the parallels between the two time periods.
C.P. Fletcher chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
So cute. I adore little Legolas and the relationship between he and Thranduil is so sweet in this story! Thank you for making my heart smile. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Little Legolas and King Thranduil are my fav characters! :) thank u for this heart-warming story!
shiny-chang chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
alnjf;aisfjlksjfj this is so adorable and squishy i just want to hug both of them! 3
Portuguese Irish chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Adorable 3
Kurami chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Well, that was pretty much one of the cutest things I've read in a long while. You've gone and given me the warm-fuzzies. Very well written, I can picture little Legolas stalling for time and trying not to nod off. Good job, hope to see more work from you. :3
rosewolf17 chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Fabulous!
XxxLegolasloverxxX chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
I know u wrote this story a long time ago, but I just found it (stupid me) I also wanted to thank you on your review for my fan-fic. I have been learning English becuase my Papa lives in America. My mama and Papa divorced when I was little, Papa came to america while Mama stayed in France Mama asked me if I wanted to meet my Papa in America. I said yes, so she sent me to learn English. ( I was the fastest learner in my grade! :3) So now I live with my cousin and Papa. And (enoguh about me) by writing on Fanfiction about my favriote book and getting the feedback u gave me, really helped me. Thank you so much.

:) And I loved this story so cute!
Lou-deadfroggy chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Yes, he did see a Balrog and lots more besides. It was really sweet and cute.
Vanimelde Melindel chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
That was so sweet! I loved the whole story, the father-son relationship was given in a really beautiful way! Little Legolas was so adorable!
Gwedhiel chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Awwww! this story was adorable beyond words. It actually made me tear up a little bit. What a devious prince. I wonder where he gets it from? It makes sense but it was just so sad. It's understandable how he would confuse the guards' conversation like that. I don't think i could imagine the torment his mind went through while he was coming up with his plan. I loved it though. So endearing.

And i loved the hand-tugging when Legolas was trying to keep his ada awake. It was funny when you phrased it 'apparently, allowing Thranduil to go back to sleep was not his intent'. He certainly can't deny his little leaf anything, even at the cost of his own sleep. Poor Thranduil. So tired. So exhausted. But too bad! You care about your greenleaf too much! And i loved him in the library how he kept peeking at Thranduil without him realizing it. It was just so sad and so adorable.

And I liked how at the end you showed Thranduil sitting agitatedly on the edge of his bed. It kind of shows right there just how worried he was for those 13 months. And the balrog in the closet...I can see Thranduil becoming amused by that. Shoot, i was amused by that.

I'm starting to become bored trying to find a sp./grammar mistake. But i'm not going to give up yet. :)

Overall, this was such cute, adorable, yet so sad story. Makes you just want to hug him to death! And i loved how Aearion (sp?) walked in on them laying like that. *big smile* I loved this one-shot. So precious. Thanks for providing such a great little Legolas fic! Huh, i can't stop saying how adorable it was. :) I'm looking forward to your coming writing! ;) Happy trails.
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