Reviews for Destiny
mrs.addiecullen chapter 14 . 6/7/2013
an amazing story
Awesomesaurs chapter 14 . 1/2/2013
This was a really good story. Well done

Guest chapter 3 . 10/15/2012
how old are you that your writing basically a romance and you cant spell? No offense..
mysmileiscorrupted chapter 14 . 6/19/2012
I love it!

I love all the texting scene!

Gotta love Alice..

I love this story!

Its amazing!
mysmileiscorrupted chapter 12 . 6/15/2012
I got tears in my eyes at how sweet Edward is to Bella! xD I would love Alice as a sister though! She can choose some amazing clothes for you :D

Anyway, I love this story!

Update ASAP!

Godschildtweety chapter 14 . 4/22/2012
really good work
Edward's spouse chapter 14 . 4/4/2012
excellent story.
Clove15 chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
This is so exciting
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I like the storyline. Its really interesting. Minor flaw; The Volturi existed before the 16th century. Your story is good.
Clumzy.Person chapter 14 . 2/20/2012
Awwww it was so romantic! Well done Lilly!
enjoying it but here are tips chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
I really like this and it is a good plot but at times it seemed very repetitive. Try not using and or then as much. Try to vary the phrases and tell the story as though you were telling it to a friend. This is a good plot and I am enjoying it! Hope you keep writing
luvakatsuki3 chapter 3 . 2/16/2012
This is going to sound really mean, and I'm sorry if this offends you. But the only reason I started reading this story was because the first chapter had merit, and I though that your grammar would probably get better as I went on.

Sorry, but I can't stand to read another chapter. I can't enjoy the story when the only thing going through my head is every grammar mistake you make.
vampdreams chapter 14 . 2/15/2012
I just wanna go Awww!
Shadowdude333 chapter 14 . 2/15/2012
running1book chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
I really liked the concept for this story, but I was unable to read it due to the many grammar errors. I think that if you got someone to Beta your story then it would flow much better. Keep writing, because you do have an interesting concept here just make sure that someone proofreads your work before you post it.
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