| Reviews for Warriors: Facebook Style! Revised! |
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  OMG It's Autumn chapter 1 . 8/12/2011 HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! THE END JUST HIT ME SO HARD! LOL |
 Goldenstar13 chapter 2 . 8/12/2011 Okay, onto the next chapter. Stars: Still 4. This time, the story was a tiny bit harder to read, but that's okay. Strengths: Personality, humor Weaknesses: It was a bit harder to read, and everything was sort of bunched together. Errors: See above. Okay, I'm going to go read the rest now…let's see what we've got. Goldenstar13, Special Guild Agent 002 |
| Goldenstar13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011 I like it! In my opinion it's better and funnier than other facebook warriors. Stars: 4 (so far). I know I've only read one chapter, but still. Your personality shines, you use good words, and it's funny. Awesome! Strengths: Personality (voice), word choice, humor Weaknesses: A bit of a short chapter, but that's it. Errors: I suggest that when Firestar reads comments, the comment is on the next line. Also, maybe make it like, "Bluestar says blah blah blah'. You don't have to abide to this, as it's just a suggestion. Okay, I'm going to go read the rest! Stand by for more reviews… Goldenstar13, Special Guild Agent* 002 *Special Guild is something I made up. It's not a group of critics or anything, don't worry. :) |
| Who lit Toph on Fire chapter 3 . 8/12/2011 Haha not bad i like it :D |
| Summers Sky chapter 3 . 8/12/2011 hahaha i thought that was funny i like it when tsset out like that it makes it easier to read i am not tigerstar i loved that and i have an idea that you might be able to use you could put for example ThIs_ Is _ NoT_ BrOKenStAR and it actuslly is i thought that was wehat you weere doing with brambleclaws one so i thought it was funny but i like it anyway but that might be a good idea cus its so obvious hahaha still like it update soon! |
| Summers Sky chapter 2 . 8/12/2011 heheheh i like it but i want it to be longer so i can get properly into your story and i know how you feel when no omne reviews its like COME ONE PEOPLE ITS NOT HARD TO TYPE A FEW WORDS i still feel like that now sometimes hahaha |
| Summers Sky chapter 1 . 8/12/2011 it looks good illl continue to read it! |
| Pebblepaw10 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011 Yay, I get a plushie, thanks. I'm not the biggest fan of Firestar but this is good, I like it. Maybe next time longer, I just love this stuff |
| Xcvfsvbqusyoij chapter 3 . 8/11/2011 XD Lol! That's so funny: I_Am_nOt_tigerstar. Bramble must look too much alike! XD :) |
| Prussian Fangirl 13 chapter 3 . 8/11/2011 LOVE da story :3 its epic X3 |
| Prussian Fangirl 13 chapter 1 . 8/11/2011 LOVE STORY SO FUNNY |
| Prussian Fangirl 13 chapter 2 . 8/11/2011 EPIC STORY SO FUNNY X3 |
| A graceful haze chapter 2 . 8/7/2011 you should read feigns face book its awsome. really u should |
| Pebblepaw10 chapter 2 . 8/7/2011 Nice,this is funny. Maybe a longer one woulld be nice,or super |
| Xcvfsvbqusyoij chapter 2 . 8/7/2011 This is great! I don't personally have a facebook, and my friend's teasing me that even FIRESTAR has a facebook but I don't :/ LOL! Keep it up! :3 |