Reviews for Warriors: Facebook Style! Revised!
OMG It's Autumn chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Goldenstar13 chapter 2 . 8/12/2011
Okay, onto the next chapter.

Stars: Still 4. This time, the story was a tiny bit harder to read, but that's okay.

Strengths: Personality, humor

Weaknesses: It was a bit harder to read, and everything was sort of bunched together.

Errors: See above.

Okay, I'm going to go read the rest now…let's see what we've got.

Goldenstar13, Special Guild Agent 002
Goldenstar13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
I like it! In my opinion it's better and funnier than other facebook warriors.

Stars: 4 (so far). I know I've only read one chapter, but still. Your personality shines, you use good words, and it's funny. Awesome!

Strengths: Personality (voice), word choice, humor

Weaknesses: A bit of a short chapter, but that's it.

Errors: I suggest that when Firestar reads comments, the comment is on the next line. Also, maybe make it like, "Bluestar says blah blah blah'. You don't have to abide to this, as it's just a suggestion.

Okay, I'm going to go read the rest! Stand by for more reviews…

Goldenstar13, Special Guild Agent* 002

*Special Guild is something I made up. It's not a group of critics or anything, don't worry. :)
Who lit Toph on Fire chapter 3 . 8/12/2011
Haha not bad i like it :D
Summers Sky chapter 3 . 8/12/2011
hahaha i thought that was funny i like it when tsset out like that it makes it easier to read i am not tigerstar i loved that and i have an idea that you might be able to use you could put for example

ThIs_ Is _ NoT_ BrOKenStAR and it actuslly is i thought that was wehat you weere doing with brambleclaws one so i thought it was funny but i like it anyway but that might be a good idea cus its so obvious hahaha still like it update soon!
Summers Sky chapter 2 . 8/12/2011
heheheh i like it but i want it to be longer so i can get properly into your story and i know how you feel when no omne reviews its like COME ONE PEOPLE ITS NOT HARD TO TYPE A FEW WORDS i still feel like that now sometimes hahaha
Summers Sky chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
it looks good illl continue to read it!
Pebblepaw10 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Yay, I get a plushie, thanks.

I'm not the biggest fan of Firestar but this is good, I like it.

Maybe next time longer, I just love this stuff
Xcvfsvbqusyoij chapter 3 . 8/11/2011
XD Lol! That's so funny: I_Am_nOt_tigerstar. Bramble must look too much alike! XD :)
Prussian Fangirl 13 chapter 3 . 8/11/2011
LOVE da story :3 its epic X3
Prussian Fangirl 13 chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Prussian Fangirl 13 chapter 2 . 8/11/2011
A graceful haze chapter 2 . 8/7/2011
you should read feigns face book its awsome. really u should
Pebblepaw10 chapter 2 . 8/7/2011
Nice,this is funny.

Maybe a longer one woulld be nice,or super
Xcvfsvbqusyoij chapter 2 . 8/7/2011
This is great! I don't personally have a facebook, and my friend's teasing me that even FIRESTAR has a facebook but I don't :/ LOL! Keep it up! :3
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