Reviews for The Mysterious Black Dress
scarletjj27 chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
I don't get the ending
Psycho GamerOtaku chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
i own a black dress! :(
lisaOpine chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Man d ending really scared d fucking hell out of me !
heart-teen chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
hahahahaha! it's SCARY and although I'm laughing hard indeed, I could feel goosebumps while reading this, good job!:)) hahaha, until now, my heartbeat is still racing :0-))sighs maybe I'm just laughing to calm myself. I really got scared, imagining things around me and what's not though it's cold here in my room and yet I'm actually sweating. stupid paranoia. well, i think I'll just laugh it off then;D good job again!
The Burnt Jewel chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
A bit...weird, to be precise. But the plot was interesting :)

So, good work, overall :)

You could say that it made my eyes widen a teeny weenie bit, so, maybe you are a good writer, and you can do better if you read horror stories. I will say that it was a good effort, But, you could do better :) You have potential :) You just have to realize it...

Anyways, good luck with the next stories and keep writing...
ejo chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
It's pretty interesting. The summary totally captured my attention. ;D

-faves-
pwenie chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
Wait i dont get it... :o
Pechay chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
My heart was LIKE uBER punding and all that! OMG SEquEL!
Melsaurus chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
: OOOO NOT GOOD O_O DEFFO not good to read this at 1 in the morning I am now never going to wear a black dress again. I'm scared O_O I want to know what happened next but, at the same time I REALLY don't. I loved this XO I want another horror : P
alittle-bakemono27 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
blusang itim ba to? just maybe...even though i haven't read blusang itim before naririnig ko ang mga lines...yeah that's why it's familiar to me! xD good job on writing this! i felt scared when i was reading!
cutecolourgirl chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
it was terrifying dude! well done!

i would love to read more of your stuff!
Sweet Razzberry chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
that was cool! my eyes widened when i read the last part! Ahhhhh!
hey chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
you should totally make a sequel!
CherieGrey chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
that was a cool story ahaha. oddd, but a nice change. the idea was original. i've never really succeeded in writing anything horror, but i'm trying lol. anyway, i thought if you had more detail at the parts where it's supposed to scare the pants off me, it would be better.

xx naomi!
yamiofetsuko chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Hello, This is very good and-and it scared me 0_0 of just imagine my mom so...

But the fact is very, very terrifying. but I think you ought to see more blood since, like when he first look in the mirror the dress was stained with blood or something :D

Is very, very XD

ATTE YAMI