Reviews for Rescue Me, Angela, mature version
RandomstalkerNOWWITHausername chapter 4 . 3/19/2012
K, little gross. But other than that, I loved this series of three! The whole picture thing, will that happen in the next one? Please tell me there's a next one!
Gamebird chapter 4 . 11/17/2011
Busy day for the gang, alright!

This line jumped out at me:

"So it's okay for you to ask for forgiveness, but not me?"

So often in fanfic, I run into a tendency of authors or reviewers to settle on one character as the good guy, the repentant, the struggling-to-be-redeemed, and then have absolutely zero forgiveness for anyone who doesn't take the repentant at his word right off the bat. Plus having no sympathy for any other character who might be in the same boat, unless that character is saved by the repentant.

I'm glad to see you having Nathan throw that back at Sylar and make him really think (though in Sylar's case, he can read Nathan's emotions ... a benefit Nathan doesn't get).

Great chapter, very engrossing!
Gamebird chapter 3 . 11/17/2011
OMG, this story is non-stop funny. Oh, wait, no - the funny is occasionally paused by moments of incredibly hot sex. But it is the best possible mix of funny and sex, and to have a great, coherent plot woven throughout is all kinds of awesome!
Gamebird chapter 2 . 11/17/2011
I gotta tell you that *this line* has stayed with me since the first time I read this, and I occasionally quote it to myself as I write my own porny fic: "I'm deflowering a 35 year old virgin here, killer. Your ass is like a vise grip on my dick." That's just ROFLMAO funny. Thank you for that line!
Gamebird chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
This is a fascinating and complicated story, from start to finish. I love reading Rescue Me. In re-reading this (for probably the third or fourth time), I only now catch Angela's loneliness and desire for intimacy, because I know where her plot line goes later on. That's awesome, that you laid the groundwork for that here, so many tens of thousands of words away from where the next relationship begins to blossom!

And of course I can't go on without saying how HOT Peter and Sylar's kiss in the rain is. Very moving, drenching me with emotion. Great job!