Reviews for One Wizard Too Many
Edmond O'Donald chapter 13 . 3/8/2023
I know you have this marked as 'adventure/humor', but it really isn't funny. It's not subtle and the stereotypes are just a little too out-there. Eventually, I just had to give up on reading it.

Sry.
CarolsSister chapter 7 . 10/31/2022
And now it is 2022, and Ukraine and Russia are in a shooting war. Guess we know where all those dividends are being spent.
CarolsSister chapter 3 . 10/31/2022
I've just fallen in love with the idea of a charm that causes theme songs to be played in the background!
Bronze chapter 11 . 10/30/2022
If both Victor and Hagrid cause damn near nervous breakdown for you spell checker than why do you even bother trying to get it to work with them?
R8chil chapter 22 . 10/9/2022
Great read!
blcoachmac chapter 7 . 10/7/2022
Get him some J-Dams or J-Stars! Blow the hell out of everything!
Slowest Turtle chapter 18 . 9/15/2022
Arms dealer Remus is the best part of this story. Love it.
Bronze chapter 7 . 9/3/2022
If you actually LIVE in this reality, you'd already know the politicians pocketed most of it and redirected the rest to pet projects. You mentioning this Peace Dividend reminds me of a story written some years ago. The author never finished it as he was sent to the middle east for the Gulf War. In the story a university managed to get the super magnets slatted for the Star Wars program. They built a very special building that had no nails in its construction. They would tell the local power company when they were going to power up the magnets and get extra power very late at night. They were using them to scan things for some reason. Mainly horses. Well one of the students had a friend who was into horse. He asked her if she wanted to know what it was like from a horse's point of view. Through some screw up she wound up a CENTAUR MARE. It only got worse from there, but it was so funny. It proves the old adage that everybody rises to their own level of incompetence. The head of security carries a gun. Guns are mostly made of metal. Ergo, you do not bring them into high magnetic fields. Bad things happen when you don't use the organ in your skull for its intended purpose. It only gets worse when you let your ego overrule your common sense. Anyhoo, I believe the authors name was TV Dave. I really wish he'd either lived to finish it or left an outline for someone else to finish it.
Bronze chapter 1 . 8/31/2022
Well, he could always just enter get just outside the dragon's flame's reach and sit down. That'd sure screw with the old frauds' plans. Take NO ONE to the Yule Ball or simply skip it altogether by hiding in the RoR or the Chamber till sometime after one A.M. Then if Good Ole Fumblemort DID try using MoooRon as Harry's hostage Harry could simply leave him at the bottom of the lake. At the end of the maze, he could just blast the cup off into the hedges. As he never touched it, he wouldn't trigger the portkey function on it. Or he could simply walk into the maze a short way, then send up red sparks. Either way he wouldn't wind up facing Vulturewurst nor forcibly donating blood to get him a new body. Yes, it would certainly piss off Good Ole Fumblemort but the Secondary Dark Lord of the Late Twentieth Century wouldn't have his blood either. If you're asking who's the Primary Dark Lord of the Mid Twentieth through Mid to Late Twenty-First Centuries, it's Good Ole Fumblemort of course! Throughout the entire book series, he proves it yet almost everyone who reads them fails to see it.
Duchess67 chapter 22 . 8/3/2022
Aw darn, I ran out of fic to read. This is definitely different. Harry's just a tad bloodthirsty here. LOL
Guest chapter 22 . 5/8/2022
Not really enjoying this because you are just one of many bad writers who don’t finish what they start. Don’t post your garbage if it’s not going to be completed. Asshole.
chaoyue580966 chapter 4 . 4/26/2022
哇,迷人的故事,我一直觉得整个巫师社会很糟糕
Artichokefirst chapter 22 . 4/11/2022
I don’t suppose we’re going to be getting a update soon? 4/11/2022
Aratherfluffyfatcat chapter 22 . 3/19/2022
Enjoying the story thanks
bluezinthos chapter 22 . 3/1/2022
I just rediscovered this story and had to drop you a line. It certainly has everything; far off places, daring sword fights, a prince in disguise... wait wrong movie...anyway, finished or not, I love your writing!
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