Reviews for Deathly Inherit
Demolition.Lover.14 chapter 40 . 6/8/2012
Well, what can I say?

This story is fantastic.

I love Valerie. She's a brilliant character because, despite the strange things happening around her, she still manages to be remain a believable character. I love her relationships with her friends/family/Sweeney and the way they all interact with each other. Her moments with Sweeney had to be my favourite though! She was very funny and he was showing his softer side (at times) without being out of character.

I loved the idea of Val's visions each time she fainted - that was very creative. Experiencing parts of the film and the family's past with Sweeney was great, and very unlike anything I've read before! Will there be more of these in the sequel?

The subplot with Geoffrey . . . wow. Amazing. Just amazing. I can't think of any way to describe it because it was just so good.

My favourite bit, however, had to be the ending. I'm glad that the Lovetts and Sweeney finally got their happy ending, especially Val. The fact that she's grown up enough to accept that she is important in the family, despite thinking that she wasn't earlier in the story, is very believable and actually reminds me a bit of Labyrinth . . . Sarah, the lead female grows after her experience and no longer lives in a fairytale land. I much prefer Val to Sarah though.

I'm sorry if this review is a bit cluttered, but thank you for such an amazing story . . . I shall be reading the sequel as soon as possible!

.14
moonshadow427 chapter 40 . 6/4/2012
The best Sweeney Todd story I've ever read! Great job! :D
dionne dance chapter 40 . 6/1/2012
I really have enjoyed this story. It is very different from any of the other Sweeney stories, and I loved the relationship between Sweeney and Val. You had some very creative twists to the story. I do have a few plot questions that I hope you will tie up in the sequel. What happened to the baby? It is never mentioned again after the mother leaves the hospital. Also, what happened after Toby killed Sweeney? How has he managed to live on, never aging? What is Elle's relationship to the original Nellie? Distant cousin? Great-niece? How does Mrs. Mooney manage to erase memories? I look forward to your sequel.
Kagome Narome chapter 40 . 5/31/2012
Awwww...another good story that has ended. i really enjoyed reading this one...now im sad that its over...
The Incredible Nameless Wonder chapter 39 . 5/28/2012
! he cant forget! he just... can't! i love happy Sweeney so much! WHYYYYY!
dionne dance chapter 37 . 5/16/2012
I love this story, and how you can tell that Sweeney really cares for the family. I can't wait to find out how Sweeney came back as a ghost, and the significance of his relationship with Grandma Lovett!
The Incredible Nameless Wonder chapter 36 . 5/11/2012
this is a chapter of epic proportions! THIS was awesome, THIS was funny, THIS was as amazing as... gimme a minute to think up something, anything that even comes as close to as awesome as this... its pointles. this rocked!
music is life 99 xxx chapter 35 . 5/8/2012
I love it! Are you making a sequel I would love it if you did!
Ziggy05 chapter 34 . 4/29/2012
Awesome! I lovett. XD Write more or I will unsheath my razor. :3
Ivory Enigma chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
This is so awesome! Please update soon!

I really really love your writing style! Keep going!

.ivory.
Leyshla Gisel chapter 32 . 3/18/2012
Great chapter! I been reading this for awhile and I'm thinking is there no romance whatsoever? Update soon!
TheAnarchist'sSuitCollection chapter 32 . 3/17/2012
Amazing! This has to be one of the best chapters so far, I especially loved this part.

Sweeney never asked for sympathy, but he needed it more than anyone I'd ever known.

I think - taking his stubborn attitude into consideration - that he simply fell into the poor groove of drying his own tears and biting back pain with piercing glares and scathing words. Empty threats, quite plainly.

He could promise to slowly and surely slice my throat open with the sharp silver of a razor blade. He could promise. But he'd never do it. Ever.

Keep up the brilliant work! :D And yes, that picture of Sweeney and Elle playing the I Never game with a couple shots of gin makes a very funny mental image.

Update soon!
dionne dance chapter 31 . 3/9/2012
Great story, I can't wait to find out what happens nrxt. I wonder what the 'brew' does...Hope Val comes back to fleet street soon. It seems like she understands him better than anyone else.
Whispurrs chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
You bloody wonder; emminently practical and yet apropriate...

Now that my sing song is over and done with there really is but onev thing to say; wow. You created brilliant and beliveable new charecters and have at once developed sweeney to a Todd!

When fanfic allows me to write [2 dayz n counting] I really hope I am as good as you. ;]
the-buddy-hollyspirit chapter 11 . 2/21/2012
Your writing is so good, and yourcharacters so engaging! I love how you handle Valerie's interaction with Sweeney; many people doing Sweeney Todd and an O.C. stories can't get him right at all, but you're doing it so well, and without bending your character or his. Which is why you have such good tension. Also, may I compliment you on your proper grammar - a quality that is getting, sadly, difficult to find.
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