|Reviews for Apple Whine|
| At chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
That was super funny XD
| MLP4EVA chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
And then... the whole thing repeats itself
| KungFuTruffle chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
I was trying to figure out if I found this to be more sweet or more funny.
And then Pinkie suggested getting stoned at the end, and I freakin' lost it. Funny it is! XD
Oh God, a high Pinkie... the world is going to implode.
| Quasimagical chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Hello. (: I don't know if you recall my name, but I'm the author of "Of Females and Feathers," that Lezzy Dash story. I know you alerted it, but I'm unsure if you enjoyed it or not. In any case, that's not why I'm here; I just felt like mentioning it so you'll know who I am.
I'm here because I stumbled upon a review you left for another story, and you mentioned one of your own stories, which peaked my curiosity. So I came to see what you'd written! And I decided to read this one.
So! On to my review.
First of all, I enjoyed this story a lot. Your writing is fantastic, and not a single pony was out of character. The idea in general of Pinkie's friends wanting to keep her away from alcohol is great in itself, too; I actually hate when people portray Pinkie as a clueless 12-year-old, so it was very refreshing to see her actually wanting alcohol, and having drunk it before. This IS the pony who made a joke about spiking drinks, after all. And tried to turn the Gala into a nightclub.
You've managed to keep Pinkie completely in character, while showing her not-so-innocent side as well, and for that, I salute you. Twice.
I enjoyed that Dash was asleep, simply because I totally agree with you that she wouldn't have a high tolerance for alcohol at all. And while I'd never thought of Applejack's tolerance before now, your story has completely given me the same views you have. Speaking of Applejack, I commend your handling of her accent: you did a great job, probably the best I've yet to see.
Rarity offering to be singled out as well was beyond sweet, and definitely showed her generous nature. I found it adorable when Pinkie snuggled up to her and she told her to stop. Lol. I think Rarity's sweet generosity here, and the little conversation Twilight & AJ had about Pinkie's frowning were my favorite parts of this story. Along with Dash's low tolerance for alcohol.
The whining was great, the dialogue was great, the characterization was great, and the resolution was great. I really enjoyed reading this! And now I'm going to fav it. (: Thanks for writing.
| FieryFilly chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I really enjoyed this story. Its always difficult to keep Drinkie Pie off the ale.
| Dutchess Of Moonbrooke chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
A rather enjoyable story!
I liked that you had Twilight bring out the 'book'
| Sythe1 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Oh god, my sides..
This is so fucking funny, including the ganja piece. If I were allowed, I would give you a Comedy Award.
| Moog chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
| PJRandall chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
A very cute story. I'll admit that I went into it somewhat apprehensively, as I've read some fics that start off similarly that I really disliked. However, it ended up being quite an enjoyable read, that was very true to the characters, aside from the ganja line. Definitely getting fav'd.
| l0x0r chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
This was quite a fun read. Although I might be prejudiced since it seemed to focus more on Rarity than most stories, and as well all know, Rarity is the best pony.
That being said, I thought you kept all the characters in character very well. Although I'm not certain Pinkie would enjoy a depressant like ganja too much.
I hope you continue writing, and look forward to more of your work.
| Laurence Brown chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
A wonderful, light-hearted story that doesn't take itself too seriously, and doesn't ask the reader too either. I was smiling the whole way through. I liked the interaction between Rarity and Pinkie Pie, one of the combinations of the mane six we haven't had the chance to see an actual episode revolve around yet (hopefully season 2?)
Also, keep the ganja away from Big Mac, please. Poor guy is mellow enough already, I don't want to see him slip into a coma ;)
| Hopefox chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
This is wonderfully hilarious, and everypony's characterization is brilliant. Well done!
| Gaztasterofpork chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Pinkie pie and Ganja...total destruction of all things.