|Reviews for Skipping|
| jassova chapter 39 . 3/6
I Love it
| imstillaliveafterall chapter 39 . 3/5
I found this story and I love love LOVE it. I hope you come back and update soon and follow through on that sequel the authors note talks about because I have fallen in love. Thank you for such a wonderful story!
| bookworn2340 chapter 39 . 2/11
You can not and i mean can NOT just leave it there come on!
| love chapter 39 . 1/27
I love this story. Please do continue
| Qweb chapter 39 . 1/14
I was looking for some Steve / Darcy shipping and ran across this amazing story. It's kept me occupied every free minute for two days. But now I've reached the end and it hasn't been updated since August! So please update. Thanks.
| LordsFire chapter 15 . 1/8
This has been a good and pleasantly engaging story thus far; unfortunately, like many authors who have an affinity for writing social interaction, you don't seem to have much for writing fight scenes.
It's not *wretched*, but it is weak compared to the rest of the work; two points in particular. First, Loki comes across as far too powerful; Thor alone should (and has in his titular movie) be able to crush him solo, and any meaningful amount of support from others should make it a complete crushing victory. If you wanted to make Loki last a while/seem a more plausible threat, having him play illusion-tag while the ice grew over Jane would have worked much better, without making Thor seem like a chump.
Second, time-scale; in a serious fight, especially melee, ten seconds is an *eternity.* Literally dozens of blows can be exchanged in that time; go watch the first fight scene in the Thor movie again (Thor&company on Jotunheim), and see just how many blows are exchanged in a ten-second segment. Then realize that those fights are slowed down to dramatize things in a way that viewers can easily follow.
On the whole, this is the first real 'down point' I've seen in this fic.
| megason chapter 39 . 1/6
PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY IS AMAZING
| lelah-t chapter 39 . 12/24/2013
30 Rock... All I could think of was NOT TINA FEY! It's an amazing story I look forward to the continuation! CapD, I've been converted. Thanks for all your effort.
| WBH21C chapter 39 . 12/16/2013
So very well done!
| lottie.romero chapter 39 . 12/10/2013
great story! i hope you get to finish it in time...
| fishertowers chapter 39 . 10/30/2013
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Don't leave us hanging! This story is amazing and I must read more! I'm loving every moment of it! Thank you so much for such a wonderful story!
| fishertowers chapter 13 . 10/29/2013
Okay, I just had to tell you that this chapter was amazing and I had an incredible nerd-seizure of happy. Now back to the rest of the story so I can have more geekery giggles
| Zarohk Korobase chapter 2 . 10/4/2013
So, does that mean that a grand-daughter of hers, named after her, might have gotten up to some horrible things in a Sunnydale lab? It's probably a coincidence, but you're a Buffy fan so I'm just not sure. Interesting start to this story, can't wait to see where it goes.
| The Silverdark Knight chapter 39 . 9/20/2013
Oh, I hope you update soon...I've read this all in the course of a day, and now I can't ready anymore chapters!
| KonohasBlackReaper chapter 39 . 9/15/2013
Very captivating story and style...
Waiting for more