Reviews for Unfair
DemigodGleek chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
thIS IS HORRIBLE WHY WOULD YOU WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THAT I'M CRYING IF YOU HAVE SUCH AN AMAZING TALENT WHY WOULD YOU USE IT TO HURT PEOPLE no but srsly absolutely stunning and so sad I'm not crying you are
IHaveDeactived chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Agh. Angst. It burns. This is so sad. Now I'm sad. :[. I want to read happy Charles/Erik now!
Chloe chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
love love love love love. i love this (if you haven't already noticed). it's also very cool i can imagine it in the style of the film - and due to that it seems all the more realistic

thanks for sharing 3
Spirit Bagle of Death chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
I love that the only time Erik can say I love you now, is when Charles can't hear. But personally, I like to think that he KNEW Charles was awake...and lied to himself. Your prose is so lyrical. I really liked "There was no light outside, no light inside." So rhythmic and poignant and nom nom faniction crack nom. Keep it goin.
Nehan Shinzui34 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
well...well..i-i'm just gonna go hide under my covers and burst into tears now!

(though that one about the crickets made me giggle a bit. crickets terrify me.)
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
oh gods...i cried and then...gods this was wonderfl i loved it
Aellepi chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Aaah, agnst. Just what I needed. :)

Many of these kinds in here, this was good, just like some of them. I enjoyed it. And it really was just what I needed.

Ta!
tisanaccount13 chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
So sad, but well written. Beautiful.
Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
oh, gosh. i am speechless with this one. ;;

but... i love it so much.

just know that.