|Reviews for LATER THAT EVENING Part 1 3|
| Ruby Ridge chapter 1 . 7/5
Excellent. Is interest, load parts 2&3, please.
| ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
well im gonna have nightmares tonight
| gkmoberg1 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
LATER THAT EVENING (Part1/3). This fits the mood I see Agnes wearing when she gets home that night! She is glowing and her momma and pappa pick up it right away. How could they not? There is no concern here by Agnes about the future, simply her elation.
My only concern is whether it is in character to have her so expressive, conversationally, with her family. There is an effrontery to her comments that maybe is not quite her, as I saw her in the movie. Agnes is often reserved, quiet, timid. Yet, I can see how she would be bolder and less introverted in the comfort of her home and family, caught up on the excitement she is feeling. So I'll go with it.
I hope you post the next part soon. Please do!
| Jobananax333 chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Nice hope to see more
| segir chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
hope you put up the other 2 parts!